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Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:50 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Absolutly, postively, love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm always amazed, every time I read your story, how well you write Harry. You seem to get into his head amazingly well. Its wonderful. I love it. I think I mentioned that already though.

    Anyway, great chapter and please update again soon.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!  I really appreciate all of your kind reviews.  I think I've said it before, but I really have always felt connected with Harry.  And I'm so flattered that you think that I write him well. 

    I will have a new chapter out as soon as I can.  Maybe I'll work on this story first.  I didn't realize I left it at a bit of a cliffie state...lol. 

    Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:50 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I love Severus' body language in this chapter, I can really picture him sitting next to and really torturing Harry. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction when he finds out the reason that Severus is taking such a personal responsibility to his behavior is because he cares about his safety and well being. Totally looking forward to more keep up the great work, and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    Hey again :)

    Thanks so much for your review!  Yes, Harry will eventually find out.  I know it seems a bit vague right now, but obviously, Severus doesn't want to admit the real reason for taking Harry in hand. 

    And like I told someone else, when I reread through this chapter, Severus was very intimidating to me as a reader...lol.  I scare myself sometimes. 

    Thanks again for your continued support of my writing.  I really appreciate it!

Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:39 am
Reviewer: bookworm3213 (Signed) [Report This]
    whee! awesome chapter! update soon please

    Author's Response: Thanks!  And I will update soon :)
Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:16 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Aarrgh! I can't believe you ended it here! I want to know what sort of control he's gained over Harry and I want him to tell Harry and I want... I want... the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: lol!  I promise I'll work on the next chapter this weekend.  I've had it planned out for quite some time.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:12 am
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    O thank you, thank you! It was every bit as good as I had hoped and a wonderful ending to my day: the teeny surgery ended up being a little bigger than expected and I had to stay a little longer due to some minor complications.

    Some of my favourite lines:
    "Potter....the medium of most-if not all -congregational concerns of the wizarding world.."
    and when Snape feels McGonagall's letter is "melodramatic". I guess it takes one to know one!
    and last, after Snape has delivered his lecture on consequences and actually mentions the "s" word, Harry's very appropriate 12 year old response, albeit to himself,"No effing way".

    I wonder how long it will take for Harry to forget or disregard this warning. Given his natural propensity for trouble, am I correct to expect less than a week!?

    Hopefully you can post more right away. Your chapters are like chocolate, the more I get, the more I want!
    Write on,
    Mamaduck

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your wonderful, kind review!  I'm glad your surgery went well and you were able to read my update :)  See, I told you I'd do it...lol. 

    I read over this chapter before I posted it this afternoon and actually felt Harry's embarassment after the lecture.  I suppose I go into another mind set when I write and am not really able to get the whole "scope" of it until I switch into "reader" mode.  lol...Weird, I know. 

    And yes, you're correct to expect less than a week :)  I'll write more this weekend.

    Thanks again!  I have to say reading reviews is definitely MY chocolate.

Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:12 am
Reviewer: Heather (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Keep it up, I'm loving it so far. It so very well written and I'm interested to see where you'll go with this. And of course I can't wait for the first spanking! =) Please write fast!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review!  I've had this little plot developing in my head for quite a while, and sometimes I have to force myself to have patience when writing to make sure I don't skip over anything.  lol.  I'll update as soon as I can!  I plan to write more this weekend.
Title: Chapter 4 19 Oct 2007 4:45 am
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OK, I know I'm whining but I've been waiting really patiently *all week*. (I sound like one of my kids, LOL)
    Tomorrow I have to go in for a teeny little day surgery and it would be such a treat to check in the evening to see that you had posted.......have I mentioned that your chapters are a highlight in my otherwise pathetic life...just kidding, but really I do hope you have a chance to post soon! Two chapters would be icing on my little cake while I'm recuperating....will you take pity on me?
    Mamaduck

    Author's Response: I'll have the next chapter up tomorrow :)  Hope your small surgery goes well!
Title: Chapter 4 18 Oct 2007 8:12 am
Reviewer: bookworm3213 (Signed) [Report This]
    cool story! please update soon ^^

    Author's Response:

    Thanks :)

    A new chapter will be up in a day or two.

Title: Chapter 4 16 Oct 2007 8:57 am
Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed) [Report This]
    i'm really liking this. it's hitting a point that j.k didnt outright state from the get-go (in fact, it was left out until the very end of the series--- in case you couldnt figure it out, i'm speaking of Snape's protection of Harry)
    though the plot seems unstable (haha, plotless stories r the best, cuz they can go in any direction...unless that's not what you want) but, yeah, i like it and am so glad you're deciding to keep it going.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  As for the direction of the plot, I'm only on the fourth chapter, and I've got a lot more planned for it.  The next couple of chapters should bring everything a bit more together.  I happen to be a fan of stories that keep you guessing, so I suppose that is what is coming across in my fic.  I'm glad you're enjoying it, though :) 
Title: Chapter 4 14 Oct 2007 6:34 pm
Reviewer: elocution (Signed) [Report This]
    ahhh...oh harry, you marvelously daft idiot...

    *sighs*

    since i'm pretty sure i was too lazy to review chapter three, either...snape sure is pretty melodramatic, isn't he? i mean, seriously...door slam, all hail the great snape...lol...very in character though, which makes me happy. that snape is awesome, if only because i have this little running film of his sneering, glaring self...

    i will keep checking potions and snitches like a maniac in hope of an update! loving the story...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review!  I'm so glad you caught up.  Updates notices, etc. were a little crazy last week.  Yeah, Harry's not the smartest, but he has good intentions. 

    I will have a new chapter up this week :)


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