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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Anyway, great chapter and please update again soon. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate all of your kind reviews. I think I've said it before, but I really have always felt connected with Harry. And I'm so flattered that you think that I write him well. I will have a new chapter out as soon as I can. Maybe I'll work on this story first. I didn't realize I left it at a bit of a cliffie state...lol. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Hey again :) Thanks so much for your review! Yes, Harry will eventually find out. I know it seems a bit vague right now, but obviously, Severus doesn't want to admit the real reason for taking Harry in hand. And like I told someone else, when I reread through this chapter, Severus was very intimidating to me as a reader...lol. I scare myself sometimes. Thanks again for your continued support of my writing. I really appreciate it!
Author's Response: Thanks! And I will update soon :)
Author's Response: lol! I promise I'll work on the next chapter this weekend. I've had it planned out for quite some time. Thanks for the review!
Some of my favourite lines: "Potter....the medium of most-if not all -congregational concerns of the wizarding world.." and when Snape feels McGonagall's letter is "melodramatic". I guess it takes one to know one! and last, after Snape has delivered his lecture on consequences and actually mentions the "s" word, Harry's very appropriate 12 year old response, albeit to himself,"No effing way". I wonder how long it will take for Harry to forget or disregard this warning. Given his natural propensity for trouble, am I correct to expect less than a week!? Hopefully you can post more right away. Your chapters are like chocolate, the more I get, the more I want! Write on, Mamaduck Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful, kind review! I'm glad your surgery went well and you were able to read my update :) See, I told you I'd do it...lol. I read over this chapter before I posted it this afternoon and actually felt Harry's embarassment after the lecture. I suppose I go into another mind set when I write and am not really able to get the whole "scope" of it until I switch into "reader" mode. lol...Weird, I know. And yes, you're correct to expect less than a week :) I'll write more this weekend. Thanks again! I have to say reading reviews is definitely MY chocolate.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I've had this little plot developing in my head for quite a while, and sometimes I have to force myself to have patience when writing to make sure I don't skip over anything. lol. I'll update as soon as I can! I plan to write more this weekend.
Tomorrow I have to go in for a teeny little day surgery and it would be such a treat to check in the evening to see that you had posted.......have I mentioned that your chapters are a highlight in my otherwise pathetic life...just kidding, but really I do hope you have a chance to post soon! Two chapters would be icing on my little cake while I'm recuperating....will you take pity on me? Mamaduck Author's Response: I'll have the next chapter up tomorrow :) Hope your small surgery goes well!
Author's Response: Thanks :) A new chapter will be up in a day or two.
though the plot seems unstable (haha, plotless stories r the best, cuz they can go in any direction...unless that's not what you want) but, yeah, i like it and am so glad you're deciding to keep it going. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! As for the direction of the plot, I'm only on the fourth chapter, and I've got a lot more planned for it. The next couple of chapters should bring everything a bit more together. I happen to be a fan of stories that keep you guessing, so I suppose that is what is coming across in my fic. I'm glad you're enjoying it, though :)
*sighs* since i'm pretty sure i was too lazy to review chapter three, either...snape sure is pretty melodramatic, isn't he? i mean, seriously...door slam, all hail the great snape...lol...very in character though, which makes me happy. that snape is awesome, if only because i have this little running film of his sneering, glaring self... i will keep checking potions and snitches like a maniac in hope of an update! loving the story... Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you caught up. Updates notices, etc. were a little crazy last week. Yeah, Harry's not the smartest, but he has good intentions. I will have a new chapter up this week :) |
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