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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 25 Jun 2008 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Anterastilis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for sharing your story with us all! It was well done -- the development of the relationship was believable, and the changes to the story worked very well. Glad to hear you're thinking about writing a sequel. :)

    Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked the story, and I'm even more happy that you considered the progression of Harry's and Snape's relationship believable, as that was my main goal in writing Emerald Eyes :)  I am still considering a sequel, and I appreciate your interest.  Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 23 Jun 2008 9:06 am
Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow, great work! i love how you retwisted the story, this is how it should have been!!! and the characterization of snape was thoroughly enjoyable. thanks for a great read, and please write a sequel!

    Author's Response: I would have adored everything turning out like this in canon, but alas, I suppose that's what fanfiction is for, huh? LOL.  ;)  Snape was thoroughly enjoyable to write, I must say, so I'm glad you had fun reading his little snarky comments.  Thank you for reading my story and for sharing your thoughts!
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 20 Jun 2008 6:53 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was a very well written chapter, so were the rest of them and i'm glad it all turned out right in the end and i think you should write a sequel to this wonderful fic

    Author's Response: Thank you, kreacher :)  I'm glad you enjoyed how this story turned out, and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on the ending!
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 20 Jun 2008 1:04 am
Reviewer: Ayana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    um...wow. It's hard to imagine it's finished. Makes me so sad T_T seriously you need to make a sequel, spew something out of your ass i dont' care, but i wanna read more of your snape and harry they're just so..amazing O_O

    oh and you know your so brillant that just by reading your story I've improved my english writing so much I got 96% in my writing assignement , OMG I love you!

    Author's Response: 96% ?? Awesome job, lady!  I'm flattered that you found my writing inspirational.  That's quite a compliment :)  I do miss my story already...  But I'm glad you enjoyed reading as much as I enjoyed writing it.  Thanks so much for the review, Ayana!
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 19 Jun 2008 9:13 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful Story! Of Course a Sequel. Harry still has 5 more years of Trouble to get into!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing all of my latest chapters, Elphaba :)  You're a sweetie.  And I definitely laughed at the '5 years' statment...LOL. 
Title: Chapter 31 19 Jun 2008 9:03 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it!!!
Title: Chapter 30 19 Jun 2008 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think I reviewed this Chapter. I love the emotions you can feel that Harry has for Snape
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 19 Jun 2008 4:34 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi there, I never reviewed before and for this I apologise. One would have thought it would be only natural to review this story becuase I love it!!! Well, I'll do it now. ^^
    Your story is one of the most amazing, adoring, cute and simply wonderful stories I ever, ever read in my life. I love the way you portray the characters, love your attention to little details and to actions not many would able to describe in an interesting, fitting way you did. Furthermore the plot was brilliant and your story made me laugh as often as I sat in front of my pc fawning over the cute scenes and other aspects of your piece of writing. Just before I read the last chap, I read that it was your first ff... I am truly amazed. ^^ Please, please, continue writing such wonderful stories and PLEASE (!!!!) write a sequel!!! ^______^
    Yours truly and happily, Melfis.
    (looks at the rating scala..."Where's the 12 on this damn rating scala?!?" >,

    Author's Response: Oh, don't apologize for not reviewing; it's all right :)  I'm just glad you read the story and enjoyed it.  Your review really made me smile....thank you for such lovely compliments! 
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 19 Jun 2008 8:16 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ACK! I just can't believe it's over. I've been following this story for so long, and it's really depressing me that it's over. But that's only because it's flipping brilliant, Jade. I want you to think long and hard on that sequel. There's just something about your Snape and Harry that I haven't found anywhere else. It's just so refreshing. I have adored Snape in this. He's perfect, and Harry is as well. Such a 12 year old. It's been so fun to be along for the ride with you.

    Now, this chapter? Well, it was great, just like all your others. I loved the part with Poppy and Harry, especially while Harry was watching her bum waving in the air. See how you do that? Such a childish perspective. And yet, then you can write Dumbledore and Severus so well. Your dialogue was wonderful this chapter. Dumbledore was as elusive as in canon, but somehow not quite as annoying. Although, I am irked at him for not telling Severus more information about Harry. Harry, I suppose, doesn't need to know, but Severus should. Bless Severus for being so patient (and LOL about Lockhart).

    I just adored Snape giving Harry that present. The part with Harry running his fingers over the HJP indentation in the cover. Well, that was brilliant. You always show us how your characters are feeling, without clogging it up with words.

    And the end with Snape and Harry was perfect. You could see that 5 months had gone by. They have a beautiful relationship now. Teacher and student, with a little more care. And I love how comfortable they are with one another. And yet, it was such a gradual change, you hardly noticed it while you were inside the story. you ddi that so well, Jade. And I love how Snape calls him, "child".

    I really love this story, Jade. I went back and re-read it before I reviewed. That's why it took me so long. This is definitely one of my all-time favorite Snape/Harry fanfics, so thanks so much for that. You are amazingly talented, and whatever you choose to write next, I'm a certain it will be marvelous. And if you choose to write SFS, well, then it'll be even better. LOL Lots of tackle hugs for you, Jade. You deserve 'em! Congrats on your first completed fic!

    Author's Response:

    I sort of had this feeling of...disappointment...since the story's over.  I didn't realize how much I enjoyed writing it...  It's a sad experience, Tab.  I sad one.  I understand why you started on a sequel...it's almost like a consolance for the soul.  LOL.  Hm...consolance...is that a word?  I often make words up. 

    I also realized that I made the epilogue incredibly vague and didn't climb into anyone's head like I usually love doing.  It's almost like I was forcing my readers to guess what was going on in our boys' heads...trying to decide whether Harry was telling the truth or whether or not Snape was as strong as he seemed to appear.  Sneaky, sneaky, Jade... *Punches self on shoulder* 

    I feel like I *used* to clog everything up with too many words (especially in college) so I decided to work on that throughout the story--by the end, you were lucky if you got a full sentence.  LOL.  J/K.  I did really work on conciseness, so I appreciate you pointing that out :)

    Funny--your story is one of my all-time favorite Snape/Harry fanfics.  *high five*  We're a pair, huh?  And I've just snatched up your newest story and given it a gigantic hug.  I love it.  I can't wait to read what you've got planned for that.  By the way, I'm never annoyed when you send me your stuff to preview, so if you ever want me to look through it for errors (I promise I catch them when I read others' work...lol) I would be happy to oblige. 

    I'm dying to start on SfS again.  I had to catch up on some beta work because I suck and left my poor writers in the dust for the past week.  :(  But after I respond to reviews for EE, I'm going to get started on good old Starting From Scratch again.  Yay!

    Thanks so much for all of your help.  Honestly, you've been so good to me...LOL. 

Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 19 Jun 2008 3:33 am
Reviewer: Ash (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was amazing. i started reading it yesterday and finished today. I hope you are going to go into third year. If not, thanks for this. You kept Snape in character... most authors who do the Snape and Harry parental relationship don't.

    Author's Response:

    Book 3 is actually my second favorite in the series, so it would be incredibly fun to explore ;)  I *am* glad that you enjoyed this story as it stands, however.  I tried as hard as I could to keep Snape in character.  There were certain moments where I thought....Harry could give him a hug-- No, that wouldn't work....Snape could smile at--  No, definitely not.  LOL.  I had to hold myself back on the fluff explosion.  Thanks for appreciating the story's subtlety.  ;) 


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