Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Order of the Phoenix 12 Jan 2011 5:49 pm
Reviewer: Tj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A+
Title: The Sorting Hat 02 Jun 2009 11:45 pm
Reviewer: soph (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you are spelling moment wrong its meant to be spelt moment not mument
    other then that the story is good
Title: Epilogue - Old Memories Shared 02 Jun 2009 9:32 pm
Reviewer: ciara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    its very good but its very similer to harry potter and the elixir of time
Title: Epilogue - Old Memories Shared 14 Aug 2008 10:40 pm
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    This is my third time reading this fic and i love it. Absolutly fantastic.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your kind words. I'm currently re-writing the whole story (at fanfiction.net) since it was my first story, and the wording etc. was horrible ;-). I hope it'll be better now. You can find it on ffnet under my user name. Thanks :-)

Title: Prologue 20 Jul 2008 10:27 am
Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) [Report This]
    You're betas seem to have done a fine job with spelling and grammatical errors, but I think they should help you rephrase some parts in your story. At the beginning of this chapter you used the term "brain battle" and I can think of several ways to say the same thing in a less awkward manner (such as mental battle, or even going into more detail and discussing occlumency). Some of Snape's dialog seems a little out of character as well. I realize you are not a native speaker, but that's what betas are for! :) Other than that, I think you have a good idea, and the fact that you finished such an epic story deserves recognition.
Title: Prologue 10 Jun 2008 7:11 am
Reviewer: Lasah (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Now Harry saw red. Not thinking, he picked the remaining ingredients up and threw them all together into his cauldron. Within seconds, the Potion exploded all over Harry, who screamed in pain and was gone with a whoosh."

    XD What?! This has got to be one of the more incredible methods I've found in the fandom of describing the process of time-travel...

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