love the characters and loving the plot loving that harry has to rely on others
Gosh I'm loving this! Keep writing! LOVE your characterization!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 22 Jan 2009 6:02 am
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| Reviewer: Sh (Anonymous)
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I am confused about the pediatrition. Why is he so "mean" and have a short temper. Kids' doctors are patient be caring. Think through your character choice carefully.
Dr. Yuri is a hoot! I wish I would have had a pediatrician like him when I was a kid. He might be a little alarming in amnner but he tells you what's wrong and what he's going to do about it (which my doc as a kid never did). And Taki and Sev are great in this chapter.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 05 Jun 2008 2:31 am
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| Reviewer: Rakime (Anonymous)
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I liked your story, it's totally different of what I've read, but totally cool. I like Taki's character, orginial and cool, I love the way hi interacts with snape XD.
But, you know, the names, I feel I'm reading an Anime's fic XD.
I also love the way you write! Keep going, I can't wait to read what's next ;)
| Title: Chapter 5
| 18 May 2008 2:24 pm
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| Reviewer: menolly (Anonymous)
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Thank you, that story is really great.
Greetings from Germany
| Title: Chapter 5
| 14 May 2008 8:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Woodi (Anonymous)
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Great story;)Am looking forward next chapter;)
| Title: Chapter 5
| 07 May 2008 10:39 am
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| Reviewer: caro (Anonymous)
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please please please please update soon, i totally totally totally love this fic and need more!!
would it be too much to ask you to abandon real life and continue this story? lol
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