pretty please more chappies? ((bats eyelashes!)) love it! need more to see what happens at the sea lol : )
| Title: Mind Games
| 30 Jan 2009 1:16 am
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Anonymous)
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Wonderful, so far! Keep it coming!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 22 Jan 2009 6:02 am
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| Reviewer: Sh (Anonymous)
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I am confused about the pediatrition. Why is he so "mean" and have a short temper. Kids' doctors are patient be caring. Think through your character choice carefully.
To the Sea!! Ooh That could be fun--Sev at the sea. I just don't think of him as the "beach type" unless he was turning over rocks and such looking for slimy potion ingreadents.
Kaslin Is facinating--I'm currious as to who "she" is.
V.
omg... you have to tell me who kaslin is!!! I don't deal well with mysteries and i'm really sick so you should take pity on me and tell me who it is.
| Title: Mind Games
| 16 Jan 2009 8:22 pm
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| Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous)
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Wow I read this story a long time ago, and absolutely loved it, but you had stopped updating it. I'm really glad you posted this chapter and I hope you continue to update!
| Title: Whispers
| 16 Jan 2009 7:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous)
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A pound is a pound is a pound. Muscle is more dense than fat. It takes more fat to make a pound than muscle, but two people can weigh the same and look totally different. It does not weigh more. But your story is good none the less.
Oh wow! I hate to be too honest but I had given up almost all hope of seeing this updated! I really loved the first five chapters and was eager to find out was would happen after the slightly odd chapter 6, anyways im really glad that you updated and hope you can do again soon! thanks : )
| Title: Mind Games
| 16 Jan 2009 10:38 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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It makes absolutely no sense that someone other than Riddle would be connected to Harry's mind. Exactly how did Bellatrix, very obvious BTW, get to Harry? It couldn't be by the cruciatus curse or wizards all over would be connected to one another and it would be a known fact and not used by DE.
T. Dumbledore is a great OC, Snape however needs to lighten up.
("Your owl will be able to find us. Now hold onto me." he commanded and waited until Harry reluctantly did so. With a pop they were gone...)
They were still in Hogwarts. They wounldn't be 'POP'ing anywhere without a portkey or floo powder. No apperating thru the school's wards, remember?
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