wait... did you have Snape and Harry apparating from Hogwarts? i don't think that's possible.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 07 Apr 2008 10:53 am
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| Reviewer: Vickie (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying the story very much. Dr Yuri reminds me alot of Snape. lol Makes me wonder if you had a Dr just like him in real life. ;) Can't wait to see what happens next.
It's hard to review when you're laughing so hard. That was a super fantastic chapter! I loved Dr. Yuri, loved the ride to see him. Loved it ALL!
You can name this chapter "Dizzy".
Fantastic! Great action, and everything that went on. I feel dizzy myself after reading it. Great job! You had a couple of typos though. to instead of too, Fon't worry...
But great story. I like your original characters.
Great chapter. I love Yuri and his accent. Can't wait for more. THanks.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 07 Apr 2008 8:17 am
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| Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous)
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I love Dr. Yuri! I have a feeling that Harry will have an 'uncle' Yuri before this story is over. More please? This is really good!
Yay! I'm glad you were able to post. Really great chapter! This Yuri character is very amusing too. Hope you'll find time to update again soon!
this is a really good story but I have to comment upon your lack of basic english conventions- i.e. mechanics. grammar. whatever you want to call it. It could have some improvement. perhaps you might aquire a beta? I've never had one but they seem to help other people. Anyway, I love the story and hope you don't take it away or anything. just figured I'd mention the potential for improvement. that's one of the reason we writers write, right?
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