Oh, my. Poor little Harry.
A rough start for poor Harry.
I've been a faithful reader of your story, Raindrops, almost since the very beginning. I was wondering, as it's been quite a while since you last updated, whether you still plan to continue the story. (I hope you do plan to continue.)
(By the way, I tried to message this to you, but it wouldn't go through, so I figured leaving a review was the next best way to get in contact with you.)
Great story, as always.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 20 Dec 2008 8:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry!! He is Such an obedient child that makes me want to just hurt those people that called themselves the Dursleys who are amazingly bias for doing horribly cruel things to him! Love it!!
Nicely written. All I can say is Poor Harry, and someone should hang the Dursleys by their thumbs in their still dirty bathroom.
I wonder if Harry's teacher is going to investigate Harry's circumstances or whether she will brush it under the carpet as his teachers in canon must have done.
I mean, as if she cold believe that litte, skinny needs exercise more than his whale of a cousin.
Onwards...
~lesleY~
Author's Response: That's a good idea to do to the Dursleys! Hmmm, I wonder if that could fit in anywhere.... :)
The famous Harry Potter haircut! I can't wait to read about Petunyah's expression, lol. I loved the length of your first chapter. Not to long not to short. Very well written! I love that Harry's teacher is worried about him? Will she be the one to adopt Harry? I'm sad to say that I've never seen this story before now. It looks promising and I've only read the first chapter!
Scorpia
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the first chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, that was hard to read. I felt so badly for Harry. You did a good job showing how isolated he is, and how poorly he's treated at the Dursleys.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: It's really nice that you're taking the time to read and review all my stories! I really appreciate all the comments too! :)
Aw man, I was really looking foward to seeing Snape! xD haha
Good chapter. I wonder if this person who adopts Harry is related to Snape. o:
That would be cool! ^^
Author's Response: You'll be happy to know then that I already have a small scene planned out with Snape in it coming up in chapter 7 or so...
| Title: Chapter 1
| 23 Oct 2007 11:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Jeanne (Anonymous)
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This is a good start. Your story caught my interest right off. I liked the little touch of Harry deliberately getting a worse score on the test to keep his family from being angry with him. I am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I really appreciate hearing that people enjoy this so far. Next chapter should be up soon!
Have you read Dave Pelzer's books? The plot seems a little familiar, but it's starting off well.
Author's Response: I have read those books and I dont think I will be following any ideas from that but that may change later. Thank you for the review!
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