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Title: Chapter 10 26 Jan 2022 5:00 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, though I really don’t like this Connor guy
Title: Chapter 10 01 Jun 2011 5:50 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Omg! Cathy say no to that loser! Connor is such a douche to Harry, not even cool.
    I love this fic btw!
Title: Chapter 10 09 Jun 2008 5:54 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    i don't like connor.

    Author's Response: Me neither. :)
Title: Chapter 10 28 Feb 2008 4:19 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    The car crash was unexpected, I was like WOW! Lol, I liked Conner for about six sentences but then He wasn't very nice to Harry. So now I hope Snape, Nick, Devil, someone like that get's a hold on him, lol. Catherine had better say "NO!" Lol, Don't do it Catherine! He's a fake!!
    Great chapter, very satifying.
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: I do try to add in something unexpected once and a while! :)
Title: Chapter 10 06 Feb 2008 9:11 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, there certainly is a lot going on here! Poor Harry and Cathy, totally misunderstanding each other about their argument. And I like that you write Harry as acting like a real child his age would. He's a great kid, very well-behaved and considerate most of the time. But young kids often do have a hard time handling disappointments graciously.

    Thank goodness they weren't hurt in the car accident. I'm curious to know if Harry did do something to protect them and if that was why he was so tired.

    I sure hope Cathy has the sense not to marry this Conner. As smart as she is, she ought to have noticed that he's having a hard time accepting Harry, but basically avoids him. And as a mom, she needs to be sure that Harry is comfortable with anyone she gets into a serious relationship with. She can't just think about if he makes her happy...she has to think about if he would be a good dad, too.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Sometimes, I kinda forget to write Harry like the young boy he is, but I made a point to show him his age in this chapter. As for Cathy, she is falling for this sweet looking guy and doeesn't quite see the 'whole him'. Never fear. sooner or later she will discover that Harry and Connor don't really have that great of a relationship. I love reading reviews so thanks again!

Title: Chapter 10 21 Jan 2008 3:37 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, a lot sure did happen! The car accident was a terrifying twist. I'm glad that they are all okay though. Connor... I don't like him. He seems mean, and that he'll bad a bad parent. The kind that shakes a kid when they're crying too long. Terrible. I can't see this ending well for Harry. Or Cathy. Good plot development. I liked seeing Harry be closer with his family - finally settled in.

    Author's Response: If Connor had a kid of his own, I completely agree with you and can imagine that he would shake it. Thanks again for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 10 28 Dec 2007 4:17 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your story : ) I know you'll sneak snape in soon ;)

    Author's Response: Snape is indeed back! Hope you enjoy the next chapter and thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 10 20 Dec 2007 1:01 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying reading this story. It's differn't from other stories where Harry leaves or is left from the Dursleys so that makes it even more entertaining to read. I like all your OCs eccept for Conner and for good reason. Poor Harry! We need more Snape though woman, I'm on Snape withdrawl and am craving that snarky Slytherin ;) Please update both your stories soon!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it so far! I try to make it at least somewhat different than other stories, but that is hard since so many people write as well. Here is your Snape in the latest chapter and I'm sure you'll be glad to know that he will be popping in from now on! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 10 19 Dec 2007 11:38 pm
Reviewer: pi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    From the moment Conner, I mean, Connor opened his mouth, I disliked him. I don't trust people who are that slick. Pity Cathy is so gullible.

    Author's Response: Poor Cathy doesn't realize just what she's getting into. It won't be forever though! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 10 19 Dec 2007 6:11 pm
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    ACk!!! geeze Cliffhanger lol just kidding Bloody good

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it and the newest chapter is now up! Thanks for reviewing!

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