Yay, terrific chapter! I love your version of events.
It's funny how whatever HP story it is, wheither Harry is evil, a saint, has some super power, in Slytherin, he always get's Hedwig, lol. Not that i have a problem with it, I love Hedwig. :) Great chapter, really well written!
| Title: Chapter 16
| 23 Apr 2008 3:46 pm
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| Reviewer: dreameater (Anonymous)
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is connor leaving anytime soon? i have this really impulsive urge to castrate that sneaky two-faced *^%#&$(@&&$ lol... update soon please! :D
Author's Response: For some reason, many seem to feel that way. I wonder why...? Dont worry though, he'll be gone soon!
| Title: Chapter 16
| 04 Apr 2008 9:57 am
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| Reviewer: Johnnyonthespot (Anonymous)
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I love this fic, but, can Connor please get his ass kicked?
:D
Author's Response: He will, that's for sure! :)
I read your whole story tonight. Very nice. I'm intrigued with your fairly "nice" Severus, sad about Harry's bad luck with uncles and stepfathers, and wondering what problems will confront Harry once he gets to Hogwarts.
Author's Response: Yeah Harry's got some bad luck but all will get better for him soon. Thanks for the review!
I loved the chapter, it was so fun....Great job, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and the next one is now up! :)
| Title: Chapter 16
| 30 Mar 2008 10:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!! I just had a thought, do you plan on having Harry's mom dump her husband and marry Sev. That'd be cool!!!!!!!!!! And Sev would be a better dad than the other guy.
Thanks for writing the chapter!!
Author's Response: Well Connor will be gone sooner or later and Sev may or may not enter the family. That's still up for debate. Thanks for the review!
Very good chapter! I enjoyed in a lot, keep up the great work! Sevy was brilliant, :)
I'm glad that Harry still got Hedwig, :D that was nice.
I can't wait for more!!
Scorpia
Author's Response: I can't resist letting Harry have Hedwig since she was a great pet for him. Thanks for the review and the next chapter is up!
Great chapter. Loved Harry and the Goblins and how everyone thought he was Snape's son.
Author's Response: I thought it would be amusing for a rumor to spread around about Sev having a family. Thanks for reviewing!
You did a really great job with describing everything and the trip was very interesting and enjoyable to read. I think it is funny and kind of cute that people think Harry is Severus's son. I think that Cathy is a very good OC, she isn't a mary-sue, so if you wanted them to slowly develop a relationship I'd be just fine with it. It was very sweet of Severus to get Harry Hedwig, I'm happy he did so. I can't wait for Harry to go to Hogwarts, and to find out what happened to those dastardly Dursleys. Harry is truly happy right now, I'm glad he could get away on this trip with Cathy and Severus, it was loads of fun to read! I am absolutely thrilled you updated, that I read this chapter at 3:00 in the morning! PLEASE post again as soon as you can, I LOVE reading this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful long review! It took me a while to post but the next chapter is finally up and I hope you enjoy it! :)
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