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Title: Chapter 17 26 Jan 2022 5:54 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m glad he’s been sorted as the hat wanted! The original must be sighing in satisfaction somewhere.
Title: Chapter 17 30 Aug 2008 11:49 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Yay! YAY! Wonderful chapter, oh I'm so happy and excited I just might blow a fuse! Great chapter! I liked your Susan, too bad Harry did not get along with Draco, but he is a mean git. Gred and Forge! Love em, Harry can be their little apprentice!
Title: Chapter 17 09 May 2008 2:23 am
Reviewer: JessieG (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have just finished reading all your stories on this site and your writing skills have improved drastically since your first one. I am really enjoying this story, so please update soon.

    Oh and if an idea on how to punish the Dursleys pops into my head I will be sure to post it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you like this so far and next chapter will be up shortly!

Title: Chapter 17 06 May 2008 2:26 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm a long time reader here, but this is the first time I've reviewed with my new penname. (I've actually been reading/reviewing since the very first chapter.) I've gotta say it, right now, this is my favorite WIP out there. That's a big compliment from me, as I read dozens of stories from dozens of websites. I actually come on this site daily just to see if you have updated.

    You have such a strong voice and a unique concept. You've managed to combine all of the cliched ideas (abusive!Dursley, adopted!Harry, Snape/Harry friendship before school starts, etc) and make them into something unique. You've made Harry into such a unique boy, and it truly makes your story stand out among the crowd. I don't really have any ideas for the Durley's punishment, though I think life in Azkaban is no better than they deserve (if Harry was going to testify.) One thing I wanted to add is that, yes Harry does have a nice family now (excluding Connor). However, the effects of abuse run deep, and I feel that even excluding the current Connor issues, what the Dursleys did to him should not be forgotten. Also, I just want to say right now, I am dying to see Cathy's reaction when she finds out how awful Connor is to Harry. (And I do so hope that her reaction involves calling a divorce lawyer.) I also saw something on your personal webpage for this story where you mentioned Cathy and Snape being a couple possibly, and I have to say, I approve. It'd be a great gradual addition to the story if you decide to include it.

    This is officially the most detailed review I have ever given, and trust me I could go on. Though, I'm going to sum it up with a Good job, and please update soon. :)

    Author's Response: I feel honored that this is your fav WIP! It makes me really happy to know that other people enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoy writing it. I tried really hard to make this fic somewhat unqiue and I'm glad you think it does stand out compared to others. I've got so many ideas coming up for the scene that everyone has been waiting for- the one where they all find out how Connor really is. Thank you for taking the time to leave a wonderful review! I will admit that you're review made me jump back on the writing table and I'm currently taking a little break from my next chapter- which I'm trying to get out this weekend. I will try to get this next one off to my beta within a day or two so be on the lookout for updates this weekend! Thanks again for the awesome and inspiring rewiew! :)
Title: Chapter 17 04 May 2008 2:13 am
Reviewer: Naomi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww... Cliffhanger! Why did ya do that!? Please keep writing, I'm gonna lose sleep over this cliffhanger! =]

    I love this story wholeheartedly! ^^

    Author's Response:

    I hope you didn't loose too much sleep! Next chapter is coming up in just a bit!

Title: Chapter 17 30 Apr 2008 8:15 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, when will Connor's bad treatment be found? I want to see him suffer. Mmmm, all that nasty kicks and punches that only an old american soldier knows... OK, a bit bloodthirsty. So what! Lil Sun

    Author's Response:

    Dont worry, that scene will happen soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 17 30 Apr 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter, keep it up!

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: Chapter 17 29 Apr 2008 5:15 am
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    This is one of my favorite stories! Everytime i see it updated it makes my day! =) I like what you're doing with Harry in this chapter nice that hes got friends in almost every house! As for the dursleys, maybe you could do lots of little tricks, like make their grass grow 5 times as fast so Vernon has to mow it everyday. Silly stuff like that hehe :P. Petunia can only tell the truth, ( that would make her false personality come out fast! haha ) Maybe Dudley can smell, all the time. no matter what, nobody wants to be friends with a smelly kid. hehe ok BYE! lol

    Author's Response: Creative ideas! I've delayed the Durlsey scene until next chapter, but it will be there. Thanks for reviewing and I promise the next chapter will up pretty quickly!
Title: Chapter 17 27 Apr 2008 10:52 pm
Reviewer: PadyandMoony (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Harry being in Slytherin works well with your story and making him friends with Blaise and Susan was a great idea. His interactions with Draco will be interesting to see since they are dorm mates now.

    Author's Response:

    There will be a small scene between him and Draco in the next chapter. I'm sure Malfoy will realize it's smarter to be friends with Harry than enemies. Thanks for reviewing and next chapter will be up shortly!

Title: Chapter 17 27 Apr 2008 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Michele (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this chapter!

    Can't wait for what everyone says since Harry is going to be in Slytherin!

    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked it! Reactions will be seen in the next chapter!


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