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Reviews For Raindrops
Harry started off with a good time, what with being accepted into the Quidditch team and receiving the broom. However, it seems things went down hill after that. Those older students whom bullied him are jerks, I hope they get caught someday. Glad Susan was saved and Blaise's teasing after was funny, poor Harry always acts so indignant too :) It’s good the Professors showed up though, I doubt Harry could have handled the troll by himself much longer, being a first year. I'm happy Snape got Harry to talk some about Conner, and I also enjoyed the beginning with Cathy. It's good she is starting to take notice of things, hopefully something can be done soon. You did a great job with the Quidditch match, I could picture things perfectly :) I like how you alter things just slightly, so that your story includes cannon events but with a slight twist. I'm happy Harry enjoyed his first match and hope to read more soon! Author's Response: It's probably better that you didn't read until recently since you didn't have to wait as long as my other readers did. I slacked a bit on this last chapter... but the newest one is finally up!
Author's Response: I can't imagine what I will do if there are any battle scenes... That would be quite challenging to write! Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for reviewing!
bit confused by the last scene, was the tripping professor prof. quirrel trying to distract snape? why did the broom stop acting funny when snape was distracted? Author's Response: Sorry if it was confusing. What I meant was a professor (didn't matter who) tripped and fell into several other professors, including Quirrell, who was the one cursing Harry's broom. It was sort of supposed to be the same as the book but I just changed that scene slightly. I'll try to go back and make it more clear. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the twists I've added to this. I try not to make things too predictable! :)
Author's Response: Connor will notice and he wont be happy... Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I have included the holidays in the next chapter-- which is now (finally!) up! Thanks for reviewing too!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
I always like stories where Harry is sorted into Slytherin. Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter has (finally) been posted too! |
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