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Title: Chapter 20 27 Jan 2022 1:04 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I sincerely hope that Connor’s behavior comes to light soon. I’m glad the other adults in Harry’s life are on the lookout.
Title: Chapter 20 29 Jul 2008 6:03 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't believe I didn't realize you updated until now! Thing is, I was away from the site for about a month and thought I'd gotten all caught up, but then I went through my mail and realized I missed a couple messages! All set now though :)

    Harry started off with a good time, what with being accepted into the Quidditch team and receiving the broom. However, it seems things went down hill after that. Those older students whom bullied him are jerks, I hope they get caught someday. Glad Susan was saved and Blaise's teasing after was funny, poor Harry always acts so indignant too :) It’s good the Professors showed up though, I doubt Harry could have handled the troll by himself much longer, being a first year.

    I'm happy Snape got Harry to talk some about Conner, and I also enjoyed the beginning with Cathy. It's good she is starting to take notice of things, hopefully something can be done soon.

    You did a great job with the Quidditch match, I could picture things perfectly :) I like how you alter things just slightly, so that your story includes cannon events but with a slight twist. I'm happy Harry enjoyed his first match and hope to read more soon!

    Author's Response: It's probably better that you didn't read until recently since you didn't have to wait as long as my other readers did. I slacked a bit on this last chapter... but the newest one is finally up!
Title: Chapter 20 10 Jul 2008 8:28 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    You did a great job on the Quidditch scene (and I agree with you, they are bloody difficult to write, as hard to write properly as battle scenes in my opinion). I love it that you have Fred and George being friends with Harry and Blaise is priceless with his cheeky sense of humour. Great job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: I can't imagine what I will do if there are any battle scenes... That would be quite challenging to write! Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 20 29 Jun 2008 6:59 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    glad to see you posting again! i liked the bit from cathy's pov, that really added to the story.

    bit confused by the last scene, was the tripping professor prof. quirrel trying to distract snape? why did the broom stop acting funny when snape was distracted?

    Author's Response:

    Sorry if it was confusing. What I meant was a professor (didn't matter who) tripped and fell into several other professors, including Quirrell, who was the one cursing Harry's broom. It was sort of supposed to be the same as the book but I just changed that scene slightly. I'll try to go back and make it more clear. :)

Title: Chapter 20 29 Jun 2008 12:53 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how your Harry's relatinship with Snape is very slowly developing. Of course, it makes it easier since they don't have years of animosity to overcome. You're managing to put in some new twists and turns -- it makes reading very enjoyable.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the twists I've added to this. I try not to make things too predictable! :)
Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you updated! I liked Cathy's doubts a lot. I can't wait for Connor noticing her observing the interaction and his trying to suck up to Harry. Haha.

    Author's Response:

    Connor will notice and he wont be happy... Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 6:00 pm
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    I adored the section from Cathy's point of view. You did a good job writing the Quidditch section too. I can't wait for the next chapter now. PLEASE include the holidays in it. And please post again soon.

    Author's Response: I have included the holidays in the next chapter-- which is now (finally!) up! Thanks for reviewing too!
Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 5:53 pm
Reviewer: PadyandMoony (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I liked the change on the troll scene and how Cathy is starting to doubt Connor.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 4:37 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I just stumbled across this and will go back and read the earlier chapters.

    I always like stories where Harry is sorted into Slytherin.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for taking the time to review!

Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 2:31 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought the whole thing was beautiful! I loved reading about Cathy and hope she gets a clue real soon about Connor. And the part with Sev giving Harry the broom and talking with him about Connor and with the troll was good also. The Quidditch match was well done and I'm not real good at writing them either, which is why I only have one scene with it in HYFP, I don't watch sports and am terrible writing about them. Can't wait for the next one! Will it include some kind of confrontation with Connor over Harry?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter has (finally) been posted too!


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