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Title: Chapter 20 29 Jun 2008 6:59 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    glad to see you posting again! i liked the bit from cathy's pov, that really added to the story.

    bit confused by the last scene, was the tripping professor prof. quirrel trying to distract snape? why did the broom stop acting funny when snape was distracted?

    Author's Response:

    Sorry if it was confusing. What I meant was a professor (didn't matter who) tripped and fell into several other professors, including Quirrell, who was the one cursing Harry's broom. It was sort of supposed to be the same as the book but I just changed that scene slightly. I'll try to go back and make it more clear. :)

Title: Chapter 20 29 Jun 2008 12:53 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how your Harry's relatinship with Snape is very slowly developing. Of course, it makes it easier since they don't have years of animosity to overcome. You're managing to put in some new twists and turns -- it makes reading very enjoyable.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the twists I've added to this. I try not to make things too predictable! :)
Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you updated! I liked Cathy's doubts a lot. I can't wait for Connor noticing her observing the interaction and his trying to suck up to Harry. Haha.

    Author's Response:

    Connor will notice and he wont be happy... Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 6:00 pm
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    I adored the section from Cathy's point of view. You did a good job writing the Quidditch section too. I can't wait for the next chapter now. PLEASE include the holidays in it. And please post again soon.

    Author's Response: I have included the holidays in the next chapter-- which is now (finally!) up! Thanks for reviewing too!
Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 5:53 pm
Reviewer: PadyandMoony (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I liked the change on the troll scene and how Cathy is starting to doubt Connor.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 4:37 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I just stumbled across this and will go back and read the earlier chapters.

    I always like stories where Harry is sorted into Slytherin.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for taking the time to review!

Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 2:31 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought the whole thing was beautiful! I loved reading about Cathy and hope she gets a clue real soon about Connor. And the part with Sev giving Harry the broom and talking with him about Connor and with the troll was good also. The Quidditch match was well done and I'm not real good at writing them either, which is why I only have one scene with it in HYFP, I don't watch sports and am terrible writing about them. Can't wait for the next one! Will it include some kind of confrontation with Connor over Harry?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter has (finally) been posted too!

Title: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008 10:06 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Have I mentioned that I absolutely adore the twins? Good update, and I hope for more soon.

    Author's Response: I adore them too! They are quite an interesting pair!
Title: Chapter 19 15 Jun 2008 3:38 am
Reviewer: Charlotte (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is so interesting, I really like it. I hope you can update it soon! I like the whole take on Harry being adopted and still meeting Severus, I love that whole mentor pairing, it's intriguing. Much Ado!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you've been enjoying this so far. Next update will be up as soon as my beta sends it back. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 19 12 Jun 2008 3:16 pm
Reviewer: papphammar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your story

    Author's Response: Thanks!!

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