Yay! Yay! YAY! Wonderful chapter, oh I'm so happy and excited I just might blow a fuse! Great chapter! I liked your Susan, too bad Harry did not get along with Draco, but he is a mean git. Gred and Forge! Love em, Harry can be their little apprentice!
It's funny how whatever HP story it is, wheither Harry is evil, a saint, has some super power, in Slytherin, he always get's Hedwig, lol. Not that i have a problem with it, I love Hedwig. :) Great chapter, really well written!
I love this story, I absalutly adore it! Ignore my spelling, :( You are a wonderful writer, ever thought of writing your own book?
I'm sorry I have not reviewed lately, completly got lost in life. But now I'm back and re-reading chapters are remembering howmuch I hate Conner. You write brilliant original characters!
Great chapter. I really liked how you had Snape finding Harry.
I was surprised when Cathy called Severus by his first name in the beginning of the chapter. Poor Connor, lol.
*sniff* Love the plot about Sev. Maybe he will see it in himself
Title: Chapter 22
| 30 Aug 2008 5:14 am
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Reviewer: skrwt (Anonymous)
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yay for booting connor out! although - it seemed like he didn't intend to hurt harry, only to keep him behind, and he didn't get a chance to explain. still it's best for harry that he's gone.
good chapter, though it's not clear how severus knew where to find harry - was he looking for harry all that time?
great chapter, and i'm glad connor got just what he deserved and Harry got his memory back. Your scene with Harry & Cathy was very touching and the part with Harry & severus and the mirror was excellent too. Harry really needs an adult to confide in.
Have you seen my new story yet? It's called Arms of A Dark Angel and it's set during SS too! If you read it, let me know how you like it please!
Title: Chapter 22
| 30 Aug 2008 3:21 am
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Reviewer: Potterworm (Anonymous)
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I'm far too lazy to log in; but I figured I'd review anyway. I thought this chapter was incredible; especially Harry's panic attack. You're writing never fails to impress me. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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