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Reviews For The Gambler's Son
Great start to your story. Your Severus is just how I would imagine him to be in that situation, although I do hope he softens up a bit toward Harry. I can imagine he would find it rather easy to see so much of James in Harry, especially with your Harry. He sounds adorably mischievious to me. And I don't think he will achieve orderly obedience, if that's what Snape is expecting. In fact, I'm pretty sure that Snape is in for a wild ride. I love how Lily stayed in the bath and just turned up the music. Haven't we all wanted to do that at some point in our lives? Although, for poor Harry's sake she might want to get out of the tub sooner rather than later. Anyway, loved the chapter. Will you be a frequent updater? Can't wait for the next to see what Harry was up to and what Severus has in store for him. Thanks... Author's Response: Hi, Yes I hope to be a frequent updater! I'm supposed to be doing college work but this is far more enjoyable! I think Severus may lighten up in the next chapter- though once you find out what Harry actually did you'll understand why he seems so mad! thanks for your lovely review :-)
Author's Response: thank you! you'll be able to read some more very soon!
Scarlett Author's Response: thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Author's Response: Will do. You can read more later today! Thank you for reviewing. |
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