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Reviews For The Gambler's Son
I can't wait to read more of this. You're a good writer! Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm a big fan of your stories...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I initially wrote the thing about Lily drinking wine in the first chapter before I'd planned for her to have a baby (I know I should plan things before I start- but I'm more of a spontaneous writer, which has its faults!!!) so then I decided to make it just the one glass, and she won't be doing it again! They'll be more updates vvv soon. I'm at work tomorrow, but hopefully I'll be able to get another chapter out. So please carry on reading and letting me know your thoughts! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad that you like it, I was worried that people might hate what I write, but so far most people are being lovely and the criticism I do get is very constructive. I'll update very soon, so keep a look out for chapter 3! :-)
I could easily picture Snape in this sort of position and trying to be both disciplinarian as well as caring for Harry at the same time. And the way you wrote the first chapter, and how Lily lived while James died for Harry was so believable! Many times this sort of storyline comes across as far too contrived, but I thought your version worked quite well. Author's Response: I know what you mean about contrived. Sometimes you read a story where everything is just a little bit too picture perfect, and that wasn't how I always imagined things to be, though it's just a personal opinion. Thank you so much for sharing your comments with me, I hope that you like my next chapter as much!
We rarely see a good Harry who wasn't abused, and I'm glad that you've done such a good job so far keeping him in character. I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad I surprised you! I hope I don't disapoint with the next chapter! Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: thank you for saying that it is realistic- emotionally- that is the angle I am going for with this fic. I'm glad you enjoy reading it, and i'm already half way through writing the next chapter :-) |
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