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Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 19 Jun 2023 12:44 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That’s quite a cliffhanger ending!
Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 21 May 2012 10:27 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, this is an awesome story...poor Severus, he's going to blow the roof off!
Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 01 Nov 2007 9:01 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, this is now the third time I've tried to write a review for this chapter. I don't know why I keep losing it, but I am DETERMINED to get this posted. Keep your fingers crossed for me.

    I absolutely love your Harry. He is such a typical, albeit extremely mischievous, 7 year old. His thought processes are right on for a boy that age. The fact that he sees running away as his only option is good. How many times did you run away when you were little? I know I did a few times.

    I almost cried when Harry was thinking about how the new baby would be "Daddy's" in a way he could never be. I wonder id Severus will ever find out that he fells this way?

    I hope Marcus and Warrington get what's coming to them soon. They are horrible , horrible people. I'm sure Severus will string them up by their toes, or, at the least, use them for potions ingredients. And I don't think the fact that they are Slytherins will help them much.

    I loved the image of Severus sitting in the Dursley's house folding the linen napkin into squares. I'm not sure what was making him so nervous. Was it the Dursleys? Or was it the fact that Harry was acting so strangely? He has to know that the boy was up to something.

    And now you've left us hanging on a cliff. What did we ever do to you to deserve that? Just kidding, of course. A little suspense every once in while never really hurt anyone.

    I'm going to post this right now before I lose it again. I'm loving the story and can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks so much for sharing...

    Author's Response: Ooh I forgot to respond to this- I am so happy that you like the story! I do apologise for all the cliffhangers though... I hope it'll be worth it in the end, hehe. New update out vvvv soon! 
Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 28 Oct 2007 5:20 am
Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed) [Report This]
    It's brilliant. I love how depressive Lily is, and Harry is adorable. But I hate that he threw the unicorn horn into the lake...I really hate that part. But it's your story, so whatever. You're doing a great job, and it's pretty funny.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you like the way I have the characters- i thought it would be quite funny to portray them like that! Hope you're still enjoying the story! 
Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 28 Oct 2007 4:55 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!! Poor Harry!! I hope that he hasn't been captured by Death Eaters!! And I do wish he'd tell Severus about whatever it was he did so that those evil boys couldn't blackmail him anymore!! Great chapter - I'm on the edge of my seat with worry for Harry!!
    Scarlett

    Author's Response:
    Thanks for reviewing, it's really nice to know that you're enjoying the story! 
Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 28 Oct 2007 4:53 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    The blackmailing part makes me really wonder what will come of it. I like the way we see all of their thoughts, and that the three are often thinking quite different things about each other. This is very enjoyable.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like the way the thoughts are mixed up like that, I was worried about it seeming a bit muddled... thanks for the feedback!
Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 28 Oct 2007 2:44 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story. I hope severus finds out about the other kids blackmailing Harry. Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping you'll enjoy the next chapters! :-)
Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 28 Oct 2007 1:06 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh! What's going on? Oh, please update soon. I might actually die if I don't find out what's happened. Harry's experiencing a very natural thought process, I do believe. I have a younger brother who used to "run away" all the time, but it was usually to the next door neighbors yard or to our backyard or to the basement. He wasn't too bright. Lol. And he always yelled, "I'm running away!" Anyway, I'm very very curious what's happening right now :D

    Oh, btw, I think it's Grunnings Drills, not Drunnings. I don't have my books with me to look it up for sure, but I think it's Grunnings.

    Keep it coming! You're doing fantastic!

    Author's Response: You're right, it is Grunnings! Arrgh, i hate making mistakes!! I was quite tired when I finished writing and should have it through more carefully. I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'll have a new chapter out soon. I had a friend who used to run away when I was younger- it mainly involved her camping out in her treehouse LOL. I'll hopefully have an update out in a couple of days. Thanks for your review :-)

    Author's Response: You're right, it is Grunnings! Arrgh, i hate making mistakes!! I was quite tired when I finished writing and should have it through more carefully. I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'll have a new chapter out soon. I had a friend who used to run away when I was younger- it mainly involved her camping out in her treehouse LOL. I'll hopefully have an update out in a couple of days. Thanks for your review :-)
Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 28 Oct 2007 12:55 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    poor Harry! Cant wait too read your next update XD

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I really appreciate it... :-)
Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while. 27 Oct 2007 11:02 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wait, what just happened? Was Harry kidnapped? Thanks for the update! I'm quickly falling in love with this story. I can't wait to read more. I hope someone will find out about Marcus soon.

    Author's Response:
    Thanks for reviewing, it's really nice that you're enjoying the story! 

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