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Reviews For The Gambler's Son
I absolutely love your Harry. He is such a typical, albeit extremely mischievous, 7 year old. His thought processes are right on for a boy that age. The fact that he sees running away as his only option is good. How many times did you run away when you were little? I know I did a few times. I almost cried when Harry was thinking about how the new baby would be "Daddy's" in a way he could never be. I wonder id Severus will ever find out that he fells this way? I hope Marcus and Warrington get what's coming to them soon. They are horrible , horrible people. I'm sure Severus will string them up by their toes, or, at the least, use them for potions ingredients. And I don't think the fact that they are Slytherins will help them much. I loved the image of Severus sitting in the Dursley's house folding the linen napkin into squares. I'm not sure what was making him so nervous. Was it the Dursleys? Or was it the fact that Harry was acting so strangely? He has to know that the boy was up to something. And now you've left us hanging on a cliff. What did we ever do to you to deserve that? Just kidding, of course. A little suspense every once in while never really hurt anyone. I'm going to post this right now before I lose it again. I'm loving the story and can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks so much for sharing... Author's Response: Ooh I forgot to respond to this- I am so happy that you like the story! I do apologise for all the cliffhangers though... I hope it'll be worth it in the end, hehe. New update out vvvv soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you like the way I have the characters- i thought it would be quite funny to portray them like that! Hope you're still enjoying the story!
Scarlett Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it's really nice to know that you're enjoying the story!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like the way the thoughts are mixed up like that, I was worried about it seeming a bit muddled... thanks for the feedback!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping you'll enjoy the next chapters! :-)
Oh, btw, I think it's Grunnings Drills, not Drunnings. I don't have my books with me to look it up for sure, but I think it's Grunnings. Keep it coming! You're doing fantastic! Author's Response: You're right, it is Grunnings! Arrgh, i hate making mistakes!! I was quite tired when I finished writing and should have it through more carefully. I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'll have a new chapter out soon. I had a friend who used to run away when I was younger- it mainly involved her camping out in her treehouse LOL. I'll hopefully have an update out in a couple of days. Thanks for your review :-) Author's Response: You're right, it is Grunnings! Arrgh, i hate making mistakes!! I was quite tired when I finished writing and should have it through more carefully. I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'll have a new chapter out soon. I had a friend who used to run away when I was younger- it mainly involved her camping out in her treehouse LOL. I'll hopefully have an update out in a couple of days. Thanks for your review :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I really appreciate it... :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it's really nice that you're enjoying the story! |
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