| Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while.
| 28 Oct 2007 4:53 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed)
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The blackmailing part makes me really wonder what will come of it. I like the way we see all of their thoughts, and that the three are often thinking quite different things about each other. This is very enjoyable.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like the way the thoughts are mixed up like that, I was worried about it seeming a bit muddled... thanks for the feedback!
| Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while.
| 28 Oct 2007 2:44 am
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Great story. I hope severus finds out about the other kids blackmailing Harry. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping you'll enjoy the next chapters! :-)
| Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while.
| 28 Oct 2007 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: Caramello (Signed)
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Ahh! What's going on? Oh, please update soon. I might actually die if I don't find out what's happened. Harry's experiencing a very natural thought process, I do believe. I have a younger brother who used to "run away" all the time, but it was usually to the next door neighbors yard or to our backyard or to the basement. He wasn't too bright. Lol. And he always yelled, "I'm running away!" Anyway, I'm very very curious what's happening right now :D
Oh, btw, I think it's Grunnings Drills, not Drunnings. I don't have my books with me to look it up for sure, but I think it's Grunnings.
Keep it coming! You're doing fantastic!
Author's Response: You're right, it is Grunnings! Arrgh, i hate making mistakes!! I was quite tired when I finished writing and should have it through more carefully. I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'll have a new chapter out soon. I had a friend who used to run away when I was younger- it mainly involved her camping out in her treehouse LOL. I'll hopefully have an update out in a couple of days. Thanks for your review :-)
Author's Response: You're right, it is Grunnings! Arrgh, i hate making mistakes!! I was quite tired when I finished writing and should have it through more carefully. I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'll have a new chapter out soon. I had a friend who used to run away when I was younger- it mainly involved her camping out in her treehouse LOL. I'll hopefully have an update out in a couple of days. Thanks for your review :-)
| Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while.
| 28 Oct 2007 12:55 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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poor Harry! Cant wait too read your next update XD
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I really appreciate it... :-)
| Title: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while.
| 27 Oct 2007 11:02 pm
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| Reviewer: ER (Anonymous)
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Wait, what just happened? Was Harry kidnapped? Thanks for the update! I'm quickly falling in love with this story. I can't wait to read more. I hope someone will find out about Marcus soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it's really nice that you're enjoying the story!
good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks :-)
A cliffhanger indeed! How dare you?! lol. Good chapter! I like how the beginning was from Harry's perspective. I think you've realistically characterized him as a seven year old. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: hehe, i'm glad you liked it. Btw, I am still loving your story!
Oh, this is really good! I've been really busy the past few days and haven't been able to read much, but I'm so glad I decided to click on this story :) Actually, I love the way you've interpreted Severus. I think you've kept him in character really well. I've always thought he would be strict and a bit old-fashioned as a father.
I can't wait to read more of this. You're a good writer!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm a big fan of your stories...
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