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Title: Chapter 1: Let the games begin. 24 Oct 2007 2:30 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting premise. It almost seems as if Lily doesn't really care for Harry. I'm sure she does, but she seems kind of indifferent to him, which is different than how Lily is usually portrayed. I like it. Please keep writing. I have a feeling this will be a very good story.

    Author's Response: Yes she does seem that way, doesn't she? I think I may have gone a little too far- but I was trying to humanize her character, as I often find her portrayed almost Saint like! I'm going to clear a few things up with my next chapter! Thank you for you review, hopefully the next installment won't disappoint! 
Title: Chapter 1: Let the games begin. 24 Oct 2007 9:29 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    I just typed out a long review, but I somehow deleted it before I could post it. I don't know why, but I seem to do that quite frequently. Anyway, I'll try to remember what I wrote.

    Great start to your story. Your Severus is just how I would imagine him to be in that situation, although I do hope he softens up a bit toward Harry. I can imagine he would find it rather easy to see so much of James in Harry, especially with your Harry. He sounds adorably mischievious to me. And I don't think he will achieve orderly obedience, if that's what Snape is expecting. In fact, I'm pretty sure that Snape is in for a wild ride.

    I love how Lily stayed in the bath and just turned up the music. Haven't we all wanted to do that at some point in our lives? Although, for poor Harry's sake she might want to get out of the tub sooner rather than later.

    Anyway, loved the chapter. Will you be a frequent updater? Can't wait for the next to see what Harry was up to and what Severus has in store for him. Thanks...

    Author's Response: Hi,
    Yes I hope to be a frequent updater! I'm supposed to be doing college work but this is far more enjoyable! I think Severus may lighten up in the next chapter- though once you find out what Harry actually did you'll understand why he seems so mad! thanks for your lovely review :-)
Title: Chapter 1: Let the games begin. 24 Oct 2007 6:58 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Intresting start and a very intresting twist, please keep it going. I'm really looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: thank you! you'll be able to read some more very soon!
Title: Chapter 1: Let the games begin. 24 Oct 2007 5:58 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!! Kudos on starting your first fic!! And you've really made a terrific start here!! I'm certainly looking forward to more - although I hope Severus isn't too hard on poor little Harry!!
    Scarlett

    Author's Response: thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 1: Let the games begin. 24 Oct 2007 5:38 am
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, this is a great start, and a very creative plotline! I love characters who exhibit depth, and you seem to have skill in this area. Please keep writing!

    Author's Response: Will do. You can read more later today! Thank you for reviewing.

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