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Title: Chapter 8 : Beware the man with chocolate frogs! 23 Nov 2007 3:24 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    lol. loved the ending.

    Author's Response: It made me laugh when I wrote it lol.
Title: Chapter 8 : Beware the man with chocolate frogs! 23 Nov 2007 12:10 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Don't be worried, I thought this chapter was more than "okay" as you feared. The interaction between Harry and Snape was priceless. Keep up the good work ;-)

    Author's Response: Aww, that's nice of you to say. Thanks for reviewing :-)
Title: Chapter 8 : Beware the man with chocolate frogs! 23 Nov 2007 12:03 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh!! I had just finished the last chapter when I got the notice for this one!! Well done!!

    Poor little Harry - I was afraid he was in for it, and I was right!! Leave it to Severus to have a punishment 'method' down to counting the smacks and timing to corner sitting!! LOL!!

    Still, I'm glad that Severus always takes time to comfort Harry after his punishments - I little cuddle goes a long way into making sure Harry doesn't feel unloved just because he's done something wrong!!

    Go Albus!! Harry really does need something to keep him occupied so he's not running around unsupervised like a little wild man!! I'm sure Severus will have some vague (or not so vague) threats for Hagrid should anything happen to Harry under his supervision!!

    Terrific chapter!! Thanks for such a quick update!!
    Scarlett

    Author's Response:

    Hehe, I imagine Snape being methodical- after all, he must be to brew all those potions :-)

    Glad you enjoyed it!

    Thanks for reviewing  :-) 

Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 22 Nov 2007 11:49 pm
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    "Hullo Daddy" OMG!! I laughed so hard when I read that - Harry is going to be in such trouble!! I'm so glad that Severus came back and gave Harry a cuddle when he was being so fractious with Albus - Harry really needed that reassurance, and I was completely thrilled when Severus gave it to him = he's really not his father!!
    Terrific chapter!! I'll be waiting whenever you get your schoolwork done, no worries!! Hope it's going well!!
    Scarlett

    Author's Response: Hehe, he sure is in for trouble! Thanks for reviewing 
Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 22 Nov 2007 8:37 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoy this story. I love the way you are portraying young Harry and Sev. Harry is adorable and I love Snape as a dad to him. Love it.

    Author's Response: thank you! and glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 22 Nov 2007 4:10 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, I love it! I was a little afraid that the story would end with Asphodel's birth, but I'm glad to see you're keeping it up :D I wonder if Harry will use the baby as an excuse for his escapades this time, lol.

    Author's Response:

    Nope, I'm definitely going to carry on... it's far too fun to write. Lol. 

    Thanks for reviewing!!! 

Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 22 Nov 2007 2:50 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The scene when Snape went to Harry after the birth of his daughter bought tears to my eyes while the ending had me laughing. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: that's so sweet of you to say, thank you
Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 21 Nov 2007 4:55 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lol.I love your Harry. He's so mischievous. It's really funny. Poor Snape having to deal with all that. I am glad to see a story with Harry acting like a real kid, always into trouble, not caring about anything other than playing or himself. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: I like Harry as a regular kid, getting into scrapes and acting like a normal (as normal as a wizard could be lol) child so thanks for saying that! glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 21 Nov 2007 4:38 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    One other thing. Having been in childbirth (over 24 hours of it), it is very true that women don't remember the pain. We can remember that it hurt!!! but we can't recall the feeling of pain (ie, make our body feel the pain again). If we did, we would be a world of only children.

    No one can remember pain. We, as a species, wouldn't survive if we could remember pain.

    Author's Response: Very true. She would have remembered it, I just wanted to make her exaggerate the contrast lol. 
Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 21 Nov 2007 3:53 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I am truly loving this story. And really, what woman in childbirth doesn't wish for a wand in order to destroy the offending "bits" that got her in that situation.

    Giggling madly and going back to reread it.

    Author's Response: hehe, i would definitely be reaching for a wand to make it easier if it were me... lol. Thanks for reviewing 

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