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Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 21 Nov 2007 3:19 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Quite the cliffie, I'd say... *shakes fist* But a wonderful chapter!! I think this one was my favorite so far. It was humorous and a bit fluffy (but not overly mushy, which I love) and poor Harry...I think he's in for it.

    I loved the bits with Harry and Albus. Harry acts very much the way I would expect a seven-year-old to behave. The part where Harry felt terrbile about making Dumbledore disappointed was adorable. I love how you are able to keep small things in canon while creating your own amazing, original story!

    This line made me laugh...outloud...at Starbucks:

    "The man has a seed, and puts his seed inside the woman. The seed grows, like Professor Sprout’s plants do in the greenhouse."

    **For some reason, that just struck me as funny....the omniscient Dumbledore using such a cliched comparison. I loved it.

    Good lord, Harry needs to quit putting himself in danger!...he hasn't even hit double digits in age yet!..lol. Hopefully Severus relates that message without smothering it by his anger. I have a feeling that little Harry is in for quite the spanking. Am I right?

    By the way, I think your verion of little!Harry is possibly my favorite ever written. It's just so original! And this entire story is extremely well-written. Keep up the great work! I'm loving it.

    Author's Response:

     Hehe, it was very fun to write Dumbledore- it's weird I find him fairly easy to write, but then I'm worried about being a little cliched...

    Harry is definitely living up to his reputation lol.

    Thank you so much for your review! It's very nice to get such great compliments!  

Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 21 Nov 2007 3:10 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Once again, you present a very believable family. I particularly liked Snape's inner thoughts.

    By the way, I doubt if Lily would only have only vague memories of Harry's birth. Horrible or wonderful, that experience tends to get seared into the memory, unless of course the person is too out of it with drugs.

    I loved Harry's questioning Dumbledore.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :-)
Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 21 Nov 2007 9:29 am
Reviewer: jEN77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    aBSOLUTELY LOVE THE WHOLE IDEA OF YOUR STORY. I HAVE A FEELING HARRY IS IN HOT WATER WITH DADDY. PLEASE POST SOON.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 21 Nov 2007 7:56 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay!! Another chapter! I love the name. It truly fits a child of Snape's. And Dell as a nickname is so cute.

    Harry is such a little conniving brat, isn't he? Thank God he's so stinking adorable. I laughed out loud at the fact that he asked so many different people where babies came from. I would love to hear everyone's version of what they told him.

    It's funny to think that he has so quickly found the benefits of his new situation. He reminds me a bit of Dennis the Menace in all the trouble he gets himself into. Severus and Lily definitely need to stay on their toes, which is very hard to do with a new baby.

    So, how did Snape find out that Harry was flying? I hope he didn't have to leave his class in order to go after Harry. I can't imagine that would leave him in a very good mood.

    Thanks so much for the update. I hope RL is good to you so you can update sooner. I'm anxious to see what happens next. BTW, I love how Asphodel seems to take after Severus already. I imagine she already has him wrapped around her little finger, doesn't she?

    Author's Response:

    Dell is very cute! I wish I could fast forward and make her be a toddler or young child. Maybe i'll do a sequel with Harry at Hogwarts and her aged 4 or something...

    Thanks for reviewing, it's great to know you're enjoying the story! 

     

Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 21 Nov 2007 7:34 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it and well, the Harry you write is so cute!!! It makes me remember my own small cousin who is as naughty as your Harry.

    Author's Response: thank you :-)
Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter! 21 Nov 2007 6:46 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really awesome chapter, I really liked the mentality of Harry in this chapter, because he acts like any other kid that is about to get a sibling. I still don't like Lily's attitude she just seems to act like she doesn't have the time, patience or energy to deal with her children. Looking forward to the next chapter and the explantion that Harry is going to have for Severus and the aftermath. Keep up the awesome work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Lily is being quite tough to write. I feel like I'm pushing her out of the story so I think i'll have to give her more action in the next chapter... Thanks for reviewing :-)
Title: Chapter 6: Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again... 21 Nov 2007 12:33 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is truly amazing. As for grass it is not used on both sides of the puddle.

    Author's Response:
    Thanks for reviewing, it's really great for me that you're enjoying the story! 
Title: Chapter 6: Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again... 15 Nov 2007 10:26 pm
Reviewer: xoxamandaxox (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow amazing story, really love the Harry Snape interaction. Can't wait for more.
    Thankyou

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it's really nice that you're enjoying the story! 
Title: Chapter 6: Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again... 11 Nov 2007 5:23 am
Reviewer: Umitilla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    In the United States, punctuation is always put inside the quotation marks, so I can see why a reviewer might be a little confused. British spelling however, well duh… hello!!! :)

    You have a nice story. I like it so far, especially your characterization of Snape. He's still 'Snape-ish,' but yet he's 'nice.'

    Author's Response: thank you for reviewing! :-)
Title: Chapter 6: Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again... 11 Nov 2007 3:31 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww!! Harry and Severus cuddling!! Yes!! That's just what I needed after a week from heck!! :>)
    Poor Harry!! I wonder if he really has learned his lesson - I'm sure he'll try to be a good boy, but if Flint keeps up with his nonsense, Harry may have to get some revenge!! Hopefully, he'll know enough to sic his Daddy on him!! Terrific chapter!! Boy's name: Septimus
    Girl's name: Hyacinth

    Author's Response: Aww hope your week got better! Thanks for reviewing, it's really nice that you're enjoying the story! 

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