Title: Chapter 5: What Is
| 25 Nov 2018 9:02 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great story, but I feel like it's a bit rushed. Normally I don't leave so many critiques, but I really think that with some plot changes, this story could be really good. We didn't really get to see Harry come to terms with his new life, which was what I was really hoping for.
I do like how Harry sees visions of his previous life and is disturbed by them. Very creative!
-P.G.
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