I hope Hannah can come with Kyler and watch Harry during the day that way she can tutor them both while Severus teaches . I don't trust whoever Dumbledore will choose to look after harry-- the in his pocket weasleys most likely. Do admit I'm sad that Lucius tried to kill them though; I like the stories where they are good friends and harry and Draco are practically raised together
| Title: Chapter 5
| 20 Jan 2016 10:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much a great chapter!
Fawkes reaction to Harry was interesting. I wonder if he would defy Albus to defend Harry? The castle making accommodations for Harry is interesting, too. It sounds like Harry has some unexpected allies.
I love that you've made little Harry really powerful. It makes me think that maybe if Dumbledore did capture him, he'd be able to hold his own because he'd be upset about leaving Daddy. Great chapter--I loved the duel between Snape and Lucius.
-P.G.
I'm really enjoying this story, please continue soon, I have to know how this ends!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 15 Nov 2008 11:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Amy (Anonymous)
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This story is fantastic! I'm sitting in the dark in my room, having stayed up late to read this =] I can't wait to read the next chapter - keep up the good work =]
Damn, this is good! Keep writing--please!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 11 Sep 2008 12:43 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Good chapter. Your Severus is very soft and loving to Harry, but that's very believable because of the circumstances that you've brought to the story. To offset his softness, though, you've got lots of harshness in other characters like Malfoy and even the very manipulative Dumbledore, so it makes for a very good and interesting story.
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