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Reviews For My Son
-P.G.
-P.G.
poor little Harry. What hell his life must have been with the Dursleys. Is Severus going to have a friend in Phillip Mays, I wonder? I take it your Albus Dumbledore is going to be as evil as Voldemort in his own way. I am not a fan of evil and manipulative Dumbledore, but we shall see what you ahve done with him. Lesley~
I do have one question and this worried me throughout the chapter. But I must be especially thick as no one else has asked this question in all your other reviews. What is 'Rys'in toddlerese? I cannot work it out, I am afraid. Severus didn't even have to think what it meant. I can't turn Harry, or boy, or even freak into Rys. Please put me out of my misery. I was surprised that the woman from child protection was there and would allow anyone to buy a child. I thought the whole 'adoption' would have been done secretly and illegally. I am sure that selling children is not legal in Britain. But apart from this, it is lovely to see the development of the relationship between father and son. It is so heart-rendiing to see just how much Harry craves affection that he would take to a perfect stranger so quickly. But he is being offered affection and kindness, something the little boy has never experienced, that he can remember anyway. Did James know that HArry wasn't his. It is also sad that the man who died to protect HArry has now been totally obliterated and I doubt Sev will make any kind of point to mention him. He did say something about 'your other daddy', but I suppose that will be the first and the last time that Sev talks about James to HArry. On to chapter 2. Lesley~ Author's Response: "Rys" was the only part of "Harry's" that the toddler could pronounce. His relatives tended to scream his name at him, which is why Harry isn't too fond of it. Private adoptions often involve fees, which in the early 1980s were not regulated - at least in America, not too sure about Britain. A CPS worker would have just been there to witness the exchange and sign off on it, and didn't know how much 'fee' changed hands. James did know and is talked about through the story. Thank you for reading.
-P.G.
I am really enjoying your story. The writing is very good and descriptive, the emotions are sharp, and the plot is fast-paced, but not so fast that we can't appreciate the little moments between Sev and Harry. This is so good! -P.G.
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