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Reviews For The House Which Time Forgot
Great chapter! Good thing Snape cut Harry off when he was trying to explain what he was doing standing on the bed. I don't think that trying to jump to the window to run away from him would have been the best thing to admit to Snape! For some reason I really loved this line: "Snape belonged at Hogwarts down in the dungeons, not living in old houses with a really mean dog." Haha! Typo: "The stairs creaked noisily as Harry when downstairs" went I loved this line: "He expected it to taste like one of Snape's potions - disgusting and vomit-inducing. " Hahaha! Great descriptions in this chapter! I liked how Snape took care of Harry, giving him an extra portion of breakfast even though he did it grudgingly. I wonder if Snape was reading Harry's mind about the porridge, or if Harry's body language was just too obvious. Missing words: "Harry felt as if he were missing something, some part of the argument that changed the atmosphere, but he didn't know what. "I - what are you going to me?"" going to do to me? "But I hope your stupid master falls over dead and no feeds you." no one feeds Typo: He found an empty bucket in the corner and he took a tentatively step towards the outside door. Great job- wow Snape is really a cruel beast! But i guess he's going to get Hedwig, right? Right? Hopefully. Poor owl! but if Harry has Hedwig, he'll owl for help, right? I can't wait until he tries to escape but I guess there's more to happen before then. |
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