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Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 25 Jul 2015 2:55 pm
Reviewer: bootstring (Signed) [Report This]
    It's official. Snape's insane.
Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 02 Feb 2014 10:30 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I think your snape was cruciod for a little to long
Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 06 Jun 2010 4:58 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a wonderful chap! Snape taking care of Harry however gruffly he did it is simply adorable! ^____^ I like how you bring in snippets of Snape's past and general views. That gives some clue but also makes the story all the more exciting.
    Your Melfis.
Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 24 May 2008 3:09 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Very cool ending, I had to re-read this chapter and now I'm all excited, lol. I can't wait to see how Harry responds to Snape's new pretending, this should be great.
    Scorpia
Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 02 May 2008 12:02 am
Reviewer: cait (Anonymous) [Report This]
    what the hell? freekin awesome for a cliffie! I'm psyched with this story and I hope to all the Gods who are listening right now (which should really only be one, I think, but whatev,) that you continue it. :)
Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 23 Apr 2008 4:44 pm
Reviewer: C Farrell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not sure I get why Snape would say the last bit if not because he knows that it is probably Harry's worse nightmare. (Well who wouldn't be scared witless of this Snape!). I like "From now on, we are going to pretend one thing, and pretend that thing until it becomes reality for you." Made me laugh out loud imagining Harry's indignant face. One thing; Snape says that Dumble's knows Harry's with him and that- well in no uncertain terms- he doesn't care what Snape does to him, it should be verrrry interesting to see what happens when you eventually bring Dumbledore onto the scene, of course by then, Harry will no doubt have been forced to pretend to be Snape's son for quite some time. I wonder what Snape thinks a son of his should act and behave like? Why would Snape purposely make himself pretend to be a father, retribution perhaps; maybe he can finally get to be the swine of a father his father was? Ohh I wonder what's going to happen if Dumbledore finds out what is going on? that is if it isn't his idea in the first place. Dumble's mission to get Harry a father? No? I can't imagine Snape ever complying no matter how scary his boss can be. Maybe its Dumble's' covert mission, and is playing manipulator again? Or and perhaps most likely give the past dialogue, Dumble's has no idea what's going on and Snape really has kidnapped Harry for his own personal malicious enjoyment, a personal play thing for the summer? No? There has to be more to it than this, I'm certain. Maybe Snape found out that Harry's his son and was marching to get him when Harry bumped into him, that Snape being kept in the dark about his paternity to one boy who lived to get on his nerves by Dumble's and Snape's taken Harry out of spite.
    Ohh how the mind wander's down dark and twirling corridors...
    Well that's about it. Please update soon, it was nice to get a surprise for the day.

    Author's Response:

    What a nice, long observation. I will be coy and annoying and reply to all your wonderings - "Maybe, maaaaaaaybe."

    Thanks for giving readers (and me) something to think about.

Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 23 Apr 2008 4:31 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is mad! Lol.

    I find this story to be really interesting; I like how you leave us readers confused and wondering what’s on Snape’s mind, or if his mind is completely in tact, just how Harry is feeling. I have to wonder why Snape keeps ‘playing pretend’, does he have an angle or something? Harry really cracks me up when he tells Snape he does a lousy job of pretending ^^. At first, I wanted to smack Snape upside the head (can you believe it?!) but now I wonder what the reason is for his actions. Glad Harry is better, but will he live through pretending to be Snapes son?!

    Can’t wait to find out what happens in your next chapter!
Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 22 Apr 2008 7:00 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder, are they going to pretend that Harry has a mum? :)
Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 22 Apr 2008 3:35 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Yipes, Harry and Severus - family. That will be some kind of pretending.

    Severus is dead right about Dumbledore.
Title: Chapter 7 - Bed 21 Apr 2008 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I think this was the best chapter yet!
    The last sentence made me scream out loud in excitment, lol. I can't wait for the next chappie! I love this and your other stories!
    Scorpia

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