| Title: Chapter 7 - Bed
| 21 Apr 2008 4:27 pm
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| Reviewer: :) (Anonymous)
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that last part is hilarious.
this story rocks.
WOAH! Haha yes!! love the ending - how marvelous and bizzare and just great!! it's rather like you are going through all the categories on P&S. XD I am so glad that this story won't leave you alone. I love reading it! Especially this last part! I bet Snape's declaration will really freak Harry out. How will they do?
Fantastic chapter. I'm so glad that Snape came to rescue Harry, and help him get better. I loved how Harry wanted to whine because he was sick and had to take disgusting potions. His voice is wonderfully done, and Snape is such a great contrast. I loved the reappearance of the toy dragons. Fantastic!!
I hope that your school work is done soon!
Whoah! Messed up still, but a better kind of messed up. I am looking forwrd to the next chapter :)
Oh, wow. You're cruel.
But so so so so so wonderful! I love it! I can't wait to see what happens! EEK! Harry's gonna freak! *does happy dance* angst! woohoo! :)
This is the best! I love it! Please hurry and update, I won't be able to stand the waiting!
EEK! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
-Elise
Oh wow!! That was fun. I know you have tons to do writing papers and such but I am thoroughly excited about the next chapter. Snape being nicer this chapter was great. I loved the high level of patience he had for a sick and cranky kid. And I felt bad for Snape when he felt insulted? that Harry didn't agree/see how manipulative Dumbledore was/is. His solution is great though. Force Harry to 'love' him and get in better with the Head Master, maybe. I hope it works out. Thank you for the update.
I wasn't sure where you were going with the pretend stuff, but this is a brilliant twist. Making James Potters' son think Snape was his father would seem at this point to be a great revenge for Severus, but he will soon be hoist by his own petard as he begins to see James Potter's son as his son in return. Great job with this chapter.
ooh... well here's an odd and interesting twist....
More and more intersting.
I read it in Fanfiction first, and then found it here. You are briliant!!
I still can't understand why Snape pretended so many plays. but the next chapters in the future seems very delicious.
thank you so much for updating. I can sympathize with you about the papers due. I have 5 essays due next week.
Any way, I love the way snape was almost decent to harry. I can't wait to read about snape being harry's "father". Please update soon.
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