Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers
| 09 May 2008 6:42 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh, poor Harry! He is just precious in this story. It's too bad that Snape doesn't know how to do better. That scene was touching, in a horrid kind of way. I wonder what Snape's reaction will be to catching Harry hanging from his suspenders?! HA! HAHA, poor kid.
thank you so much for the update! I know you must be busy! I will probably send you a list of the typos tomorrow so that you can find them easily and change them without much work, unless you'd like me to just fix them for you on this site? There was a "Sanpe" and some others, and they stood out particularly this time, but I don't want to distress you or make you spend time fixing small things when you could be writing the next chapter!!
Thanks for the update!!!
Author's Response: If you'd like to fix them, I would be so glad. I wrote this right after turning in a 22-page paper and grading 20 papers for my class. I appreciate any help you can offer.
Perry