Insane ideas Severus keeps having, but it seems to be working for them.
| Title: Chapter 9 - His Mother
| 24 May 2008 3:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Great chapter, I can not wait for more. Snape seems...different in this story from all the others but I like him your way. And Harry is adorable, :)
Scorpia
aww... kinda sweet. i like how we can sometimes see a little tiny bit of concern and niceness in snape.... sometimes.
good chapter, if not a little creepy! its so odd reading this in contrast to all the nice snape stories but i really like it!
| Title: Chapter 9 - His Mother
| 24 May 2008 9:18 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow. Fantastic chapter. Really fantastic. I love your Harry and all his childish thoughts. Snape is done wonderfully too. Really good job. The ending was superb.
The only mistakes that jumped out at me were these:
"One without blood on it," Snape grabbed the potato and flung it in the waist bin.
waste
And sitting down to supper was nice, well as nice as supper with Snape could possible be.
possibly
"Is what families do in the evening?" Harry asked. "Wizarding families?"
Is this
Thanks so much for the update!!! Wonderful job.
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