| Title: Chapter 16 - Alone
| 02 Feb 2014 1:30 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Awewsome,
So cute how Snape thinks Harry is sick.
I can understand Harry's frustration but I love how you write it because it remains thrilling. The last bit was so cute and partly sad. I hope Snape get to do the right thing.
Yours happily, Melfis.
| Title: Chapter 16 - Alone
| 08 Mar 2009 2:27 am
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| Reviewer: nazgurl (Anonymous)
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This chapter almost made me cry. Snape is such a touching character! And Harry is actually pretty perceptive for a child. This story is really moving - I love it so much! I hope it has a happy ending. To be honest, I don't really like coporal punishment in fanfiction, but you seem to pull it off. Or something. Well, please update soon! Is this story going to continue at Hogwarts? I hope so. :)
| Title: Chapter 16 - Alone
| 14 Feb 2009 6:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Leah (Anonymous)
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This story is wonderful! I can't wait until the next chapter. How is Snape going to react? And they're so funny, playing all the games. Completely wonderful story!
""Because you need me," tears spilled down Harry's cheeks. He leaned forward to wrap his arms around Snape and bury his face in Snape's shoulder. "You need me just as much as I need you."" This brought tears to my eyes. Your Harry is a strange little boy ;-), but his essence is still so loving in his need to save others--even Snape. His insights in this chapter are just breathtaking. Best chapter yet!
| Title: Chapter 16 - Alone
| 26 Jan 2009 10:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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It amazes me on how well you keep Snape in character. I can see him doing everything you write so well. One of the best. most addicting and best stories Ive ever read. I want more, but dont want you to rush it! Good job really
Omg! That is so sweet. I absolutely love this story!
Please update NOW! lol! Seriously though, I almost cried, and I'm at work!
That is just the sweetest thing. Harry really loves Snape! I have a sneaking suspicion that Snape feels the same way.
I really enjoyed this chapter, Perry. Both Harry's and Snape's emotions really shined through, especially Harry's dual fear of seeing his guardian (after he messed up the kitchen) and losing him.
It'll be interesting to see how their relationship develops now. Keep going with this story; it's still one of my very favorites :-)
Hiya,
I reviewed over at FF.net but thought I would leave one here to. I really love this story! It is sooo different to other fanfics out there :)
Great work! Hope you continue with this for many more chapters :)
| Title: Chapter 16 - Alone
| 26 Jan 2009 6:14 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow. Incredible. i got a shiver as I read part of this. Amazing. I love Harry and his desperation to find attention, love and acceptance. I love how Snape doesn't know what to do with that - that he needs to give it or that Harry wants it, or even how to do it. Wonderful chapter. I love Harry's single mindedness. :) How he escaped and was going to live in a tree. It was very child-like. Fantastic voice for Harry.
I really, really enjoyed this chapter and the whole story. i love this adventure they are having and can't wait to read more. Fantastic!! thank you so much for taking the time to write and share this with us! :D
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