Ahw, now this is why I love this story.
But Snape has gone nuts for real.
| Title: Epilogue
| 21 Sep 2013 6:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Connie (Anonymous)
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I hated the first few chapters, but then loved the rest. I like a caring Snape, you know. You have real talent for writing and I love it. Spanking is a great form... of well, punishment. I'm still 12 so I know that this may sound weird, but I guess my mother... did well spanking me.
Oh my god they are all messed up, but I love it anyway. And this is so interesting!
| Title: Epilogue
| 22 Jul 2011 10:06 am
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| Reviewer: Wandacarla (Anonymous)
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Please don't take offense, but at first I really avoided reading this story. I thought mind games? Kidnapping? How depressing. But after being bored with a lot if the other fics, I decided to try it. It is the best Harry/Snape mentor/father figure story I have ever read. I laughed so hard and loud at some points that people stared (or thought I was crazy). Harry was exactly how I imagine a boy that age and with that sort of trauma (i.e. Dursley ignoring him) to act and behave. Even Snape was dead on! I haven't enjoyed reading a story so much in a long time. Bravo, you should see about getting published (I'm serious) your reading is that great! Thank you for making my day (I read it that fast), and I hope you can forgive me for taking so long to read your wonderful piece of fiction. Thank you, my best.
| Title: Chapter 1 - Vampyr and a Bat
| 18 Jun 2011 5:48 am
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| Reviewer: ariablu (Signed)
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| Title: Epilogue
| 23 May 2011 5:36 am
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| Reviewer: Reverie (Anonymous)
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Highly Amusing!
I like the heck of a roller coaster ride of emotions...
| Title: Epilogue
| 23 Feb 2011 7:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous)
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Straight up, weirdest story I've ever read....I got so depressed reading it! I honestly only got to like chapter 10 and couldn't ready anymore, I just skipped ahead to the last chapter and the epilogue...I'll tell you this...You have a great talent writing. I have a talent if you can make people feel such emotion and anger and----sadness when reading. Amazing. I do think that Snape was just a tad out of character----and Dumbledore too. Dumbledore would never let such things come to pass by Severus! And Severus, though truely an interesting (to say the least)spirtited person, I don't think would have been THAT cruel. I read this all night and I went to sleep at like 7 and had the worse dream ever of Snape finding me under a bed and pulling me out and spanking me with insane objects. LOOOL and the dungeon! That was in my dream too! You are an awesome writer, Will def. have to check out your other stories now!
I rated you a '9', because I thought Severus was just a bit out of character, but other than that----fantastic! Depressing....but good lol XD
Wonderful epilogue and generally amazing story!! Thank you for writing it, it made my day(s). ^^
I really got to like gruff, caring Snape and Harry, who never gave up his very own scowly potions master.
In hopes for many, many more stories (this universe or any other story), your Melfis.
Gods, I like Slytherin Harry especially if there is such a wonderful hug aftwards. ^^
I cannot decide, if I should be happy because the story is brilliant or if I should start to bawl because it's nearly over. -.-"
Will write more of that universe than you already have? *hopefully puppy dog eye*
Your Melfis
I can understand Harry's frustration but I love how you write it because it remains thrilling. The last bit was so cute and partly sad. I hope Snape get to do the right thing.
Yours happily, Melfis.
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