Wow, Snape is just as mean as usual! Haha oh, boy Harry loves it. Only that boy could love such a gruff temperament. I am wondering who the girl is though, and how Severus will handle her and any new little Potter children. I'm sure that Harry will continue to get into some sort of trouble, no matter how old he gets.
great story and thanks for taking us through the journey! I bet it's nice to have a completed multi-chaptered story!
yAY! Harry's getting adopted! Hooray!!
I haven't reviewed on this fic in a long time, but I've been reading all along. Such a fantastic premise, I loved it. It was unconventional, no doubt, and Snape could be hard to take, but hell, it's *Snape* after all.
I would have loved to see some of the intervening years, but as a writer of fic myself I understand that sometimes a story just has to *end* or it will go on for 99 chapters and interest wanes.
I think you picked the perfect moment, and the epilogue gave us enough to know the "Happily Ever After. (Sort of)."
| Title: Chapter 16 - Alone
| 08 Mar 2009 2:27 am
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| Reviewer: nazgurl (Anonymous)
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This chapter almost made me cry. Snape is such a touching character! And Harry is actually pretty perceptive for a child. This story is really moving - I love it so much! I hope it has a happy ending. To be honest, I don't really like coporal punishment in fanfiction, but you seem to pull it off. Or something. Well, please update soon! Is this story going to continue at Hogwarts? I hope so. :)
| Title: Chapter 16 - Alone
| 14 Feb 2009 6:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Leah (Anonymous)
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This story is wonderful! I can't wait until the next chapter. How is Snape going to react? And they're so funny, playing all the games. Completely wonderful story!
""Because you need me," tears spilled down Harry's cheeks. He leaned forward to wrap his arms around Snape and bury his face in Snape's shoulder. "You need me just as much as I need you."" This brought tears to my eyes. Your Harry is a strange little boy ;-), but his essence is still so loving in his need to save others--even Snape. His insights in this chapter are just breathtaking. Best chapter yet!
| Title: Chapter 16 - Alone
| 26 Jan 2009 10:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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It amazes me on how well you keep Snape in character. I can see him doing everything you write so well. One of the best. most addicting and best stories Ive ever read. I want more, but dont want you to rush it! Good job really
Omg! That is so sweet. I absolutely love this story!
Please update NOW! lol! Seriously though, I almost cried, and I'm at work!
That is just the sweetest thing. Harry really loves Snape! I have a sneaking suspicion that Snape feels the same way.
I really enjoyed this chapter, Perry. Both Harry's and Snape's emotions really shined through, especially Harry's dual fear of seeing his guardian (after he messed up the kitchen) and losing him.
It'll be interesting to see how their relationship develops now. Keep going with this story; it's still one of my very favorites :-)
Hiya,
I reviewed over at FF.net but thought I would leave one here to. I really love this story! It is sooo different to other fanfics out there :)
Great work! Hope you continue with this for many more chapters :)
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