what a great story this is so far, i am glad snape went to fetch harry and take him away from his relatives, did anyone go and deal with the curse vernon was under?. i wouldn't want to be dumbledore at this moment as snape is in a foul mood now
| Title: Chapter 4
| 25 Jun 2008 10:00 pm
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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I really enjoy this story so far,it has a good plot is well organized and I always like Snape mentors Harry fics.
Please update ASAP
what a great start to a fic, having harry rescued from the dursleys and snape caring about harrys feelings when they were chatting on the bench and at his house, i hope severus gets through to dumbledore and i hope dumbledore listens to some sense
I think it would probably be prudent for you to know that most people put thoughts in itallics rather than single quotes. It makes it easier to distinguish the thoughts from the rest of the story. Single quotes can easily be missed.
| Title: Chapter 4
| 27 Jan 2008 3:51 am
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| Reviewer: Adams Sunshine (Anonymous)
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Oh my gosh, I am loving this story. Please update soon.
| Title: Chapter 4
| 09 Jan 2008 9:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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