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Reviews For An Issue Of Trust
Life has been a bit cruddy lately so it made me really happy to see updates. I was really surprised that one of the old woman turned out to be Tonks! That was a really cool surprise and makes me wonder whom else if alive? I really want to find out! Her comments make me worry about Lupin and other’s fates. I'm also curious about the identity of the follower at the end of the chapter and if my suspicion is correct. Can't wait for the next chapter so I can see what will happen next! Author's Response: You have to tell me who you suspect now you have said you have a suspect. I must know, or I will go mad. Thanks for the review, and I hope you continue to enjoy!
Author's Response: lol, so I have a character stepping from midday sun into an alley, and said alley is immediately dark? Not just well shadowed? Awesome! As to the Obliviate - I didn't consider it a quick disappearance. After all, the spell does remove a memory instantly...why would removing it return the memory just as quickly? I guess I can see why you could argue for a slow reintroduction, with the person gradually coming to terms with something new, but in this case I preferred the outright 'oh bugger' view. Besides, Tonks did have Harry standing right in front of her...which could be said to have been something of a factor in prodding her memory along.
Author's Response: Heh, all will be revealed in good time. My evilnss extends into giving hint...I don't =P |
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