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Title: His Own Personal Teddy Bear 31 May 2008 5:07 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel all nervous for Harry! Thius is so exciting, your portray everything with such detail! Wonderful, thank you for posting this story!

    Author's Response: Wow, well, thank you for reading this story! I am so happy to know you are enjoying it.
Title: No Safer Protector 31 May 2008 4:54 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh, what was that last part? I gotta go read now. This story is brilliant so far!

    Author's Response: hehe, I am so pleased you are enjoying it *prods you to read further*
Title: A Reason To Doubt 31 May 2008 4:26 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I just can't wait to see what Snape does to Vernon. "Round one!" din ding! Great first chapter. Grammer and spelling is divine, I have not seen one mistake. I Liked the pic at the top of the page, will every chapter have a pic?

    Author's Response: Lol, all credit for the divine grammar has to go to my beta. My grammar, when left to its own devices, has a tendancy to be more haphazard than truly heavenly. I will smugly claim the divine spelling for myself, however, at least for the most part. Not every chapter has a pic (as you have probably now noticed), although I have made a few, and I do hope to have one for every chapter eventually. I am so pleased you have started reading...thanks for also taking the time to review =)
Title: Burnt Bridges 30 May 2008 11:32 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how you've used canon events and showed how they were subtly altered by Harry's disappearance. Severus thinks he is hard done by, but would he really have preferred to be the one to kill Dumbledore? I don't think so. And having Harry gone could have been all it took to keep Draco from wishing there was another way.

    Author's Response:

    I am absolutely thirrled you commented on all the little things that have changed since HArry disappeared, as a lrage part of the story is how all the small things built up into this one huge thing. Snape does think he is hard done by, but just because he was saved from having to kill Dumbledore, doesn't mean things were any better for him. Thank you fro taking the time to review =)

Title: Burnt Bridges 30 May 2008 11:14 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad to see another update!

    Snape's memories sound really upsetting, and how McGonagall died disturbs me. Times were truly horrible then, I feel bad for all the people whom suffered during the time Harry was away.

    I have to wonder, when news of Harry's return come out to public, how will the people take it? I bet many will be bitter, but hopefully most will be releived to see him.

    Poor Harry, the news of everyone's deaths must have been hard.

    I'll be waiting for your next chapter! I want to find out what Snape has planned.

    Author's Response: There will be quite a few of Snape's memories to see as the fic progresses, as he is the one who has seen and (in many ways) suffered the most. News of Harry's return is not something that would be easy to achieve, however.  The entire population has forgotten about him - it was difficult to achieve that, and would be equally so to undo it. But yes, Harry really has nothing but sad news to hear now that he is here. I hope you continue to enjoy this, and thank you for reviewing ^^
Title: Only Three 16 Apr 2008 6:16 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Good surprise at the end of an intense chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it =)
Title: Only Three 15 Apr 2008 10:34 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I'm so excieted you updated! This story is truly interesting to read, it holds a certain appeal with the slight mystery and darkness, not to mention the tention. Now, I am wondering what you have planned for us next. Brilliant work! I can't wait for the next chapter, so please post it soon.

    Author's Response: hehe, I try to updated fairly regularly. The first half of this fic is already written, so any delay is purely due to my attempts to polish it a bit, and the time it takes to pass through the hands of my amazing beta =). Thank you for your wonderful comments. I wish I could tell you what I have planned next (I am awful at keeping secrets...I just want to blurt the entire ending to everyone), but I am holding strong! Thanks again, and I will try my best to get the updates posted as quick as possible =)
Title: An Explanation 18 Mar 2008 1:19 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, what a fascinating premise! I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! The general idea behind this fic is quite complicated in its entirety, so I am glad you like it.
Title: An Explanation 18 Mar 2008 1:16 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I find that this story is really interesting. The way you have written the storry is very good, it has a slight intense feel to it. The characters are written really well, they sound very in character and the inner thoughts sound like how they would feel in the situation. I'm really into this story now, PLEASE, please post again soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next and all that's occured in this future.

    Author's Response: I am very glad to hear you think the characters are in character, and that the inner thoughts work well. Thank you for all your reviews, I do so love to read your comments.
Title: An Explanation 17 Mar 2008 5:50 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, yes. Harry's greatest skill--surviving. I'm interested to know who the third person is who remembers Harry ever existed. And Snape was actually more forthcoming than I would have expected and more calm and rational. I liked that. And I'm now interested to see more of your conception of a future where Voldemore won.

    Author's Response: Harry does have the surviving knack, doesn't he. And I am glad you like my Snape. I hope you continue to read, and like (if like can be the correct word here) my portrayal of this new future.

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