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Title: The Greatest Present 20 Feb 2008 3:22 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I just want to quickly comment that I've read this elsewhere and I love this story. I don't recall which name I used to review elsewhere, but I'm excited to see you posting it here as I think you're polishing a bit and also as that means you're hoping to finish it.

    Author's Response: hehe, yes, I recall your name. You have read this fic on ff.net, if memory serves me correctly, and left some lovely reviews. I have to admit that the posting I have there does not include all the chapters currently available though. And you are right! I have been polishing it, and even sending it through a beta. I am thrilled you noticed. I do, also, have every intention of finishing this fic. The betaing/rewriting process has halted my progress somewhat, not to mention a horrific case of writers block I am slowly overcoming. Anyway, as I garble on, thank you for leaving a comment. I am so pleased to konw you are enjoying this.
Title: The Greatest Present 20 Feb 2008 1:28 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    I read the first four chapters tonight and am very impressed. You write extremely well and the plot sounds really intriguing so far.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much =) I can only hope you enjoy the rest of the fic. I am pleased you have taken the time to read and review, and appreciate your comments.
Title: His Own Personal Teddy Bear 28 Jan 2008 7:12 pm
Reviewer: lyra (Signed) [Report This]
    Heh, it looks like some of my questions are answered -- helps to read the summary I suppose :)

    But still very intriguing.

    Author's Response: Gah, I have been meaning to change the summary in forever...I suppose now is as good a time as any. It seems no matter what I put in there, it gives away something I don't want it too. I am pleased you are finding it intriguing nevertheless =)
Title: His Own Personal Teddy Bear 28 Jan 2008 5:24 pm
Reviewer: lyra (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooo. I'm intrigued. Is Harry in the past, or the future, or some strange alternate universe?

    Very well written. I'm looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Lol, I can't say, and as your second review seems to indicate...I don't really need too
Title: His Own Personal Teddy Bear 28 Jan 2008 3:31 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this chapter!...especially the part where Harry woke up alone. His gradually rising panic was almost tangible. Good description there! It'll be interesting to see how Snape and Dumbledore react when they still can't find Harry... Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review! I admit, this wasn't my favourite chapter to write...but I can say that about most of the early ones. I am particularly pleased you commented on Harry's panic, and how I wrote it, as that is the part of the chapter I fiddled with the most.
Title: No Safer Protector 04 Jan 2008 9:39 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, fantastic descriptions!! Very, very good start to the story. I liked the descriptions of Remus the most, and how Snape didn't want anyone knowing that he knew household cooking spells. :) Great job.

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I am thrilled you are enjoying this, and also that you liked Remus. He is, without a doubt, the hardest person in this whole thing to write.
Title: No Safer Protector 04 Jan 2008 7:34 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I love this. This story is extremely well-written, and you use fantastic detail. I loved every bit of it. I think you've also done really well with characterizing Harry and Snape. Snape is the perfect amount of nasty. :) Keep up the great writing! I'm really impressed with this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for this lovely review =) I am so pleased to know you liked the characterisation especially, since the dynamic between the two of them is so important. And hearing you are impressed has made me blush. I really hope you continue to read and enjoy.
Title: A Reason To Doubt 15 Nov 2007 8:42 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very compelling style of writing. Unique story componants, as well. I like it so far, a lot. Keep it coming!

    Author's Response: Hehe, a large part of this fic is already written, so there will be no problems in keeping it coming for quite a while. It is passing through its first beta atm though, and being quite heavily rewritten in places, but hopefully that will just make it all the better when it does come out. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Title: A Reason To Doubt 14 Nov 2007 12:53 am
Reviewer: SPA (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, what an opening!! I'm really looking forward to this story...you have such a great way of writing! You seem very talented and I'm looking forward to more, soon, I hope!

    Author's Response: Wow, what a lovely review. I am flattered you consider me talented, and hope you find the following chapters as enjoyable as this one =)
Title: A Reason To Doubt 13 Nov 2007 11:49 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting beginning. I like to see where you go with this story. I wonder how Snape and Harry will deal with this new situation.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I would like to think the story will be going somewhere you won't expect, but only you can be the judge of that. I hope you continue to read.

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