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Title: Cry I 29 Feb 2024 9:04 am
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow! What a great start to your story! In the past, I didn't like reading fics where Harry gets sorted into Slytherin. It's stories like yours that made me change my mind :)

    It's so sad though. The other students harassing Harry and Snape caring for him only because of his long lost love Lily. I hope it gets better for Harry and Severus starts to see him more for himself. 

Title: Cry I 12 Feb 2012 8:25 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    This is amazing so far! I haven't read a Harry-in-Slytherin story like this before. I feel so bad for him!
Title: Cry I 13 Sep 2011 9:13 am
Reviewer: topeswin (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I can tell this is going to be a tough story to read, emotionally, but I'm moving on to the next chapter. Beautifully written!
Title: Cry I 16 Nov 2009 5:44 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. Such an interesting difference, yet so sad, is Harry not having Ron or Hermione as friends. This story is already completed, yet I look forward to commenting on the rest of the chapters (at least here and there) as I read them.
Title: Cry I 25 Aug 2009 1:58 pm
Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW! The summary was incredible, and it intrigued me right away! It's such an incredible idea, having Harry put in Slytherin, and the way everyone reacted to it is brilliantly written, if the actions themselves aren't at all brilliant. ;) It is excellent though, and very believable, for lack of a better word, that they would react as you've written it. Hated what they did to Hedwig! I love the way Severus is thinking of Harry, and that him being put in Slytherin made Severus see him as Lily's son, not James'. It's great that Harry is so clever, and I'm glad Hermione and Neville were nice to him. Even if it did turn out worse for him, I like the way they were behaving, it would have been very unrealistic for them to have shoved him. On the whole, I love it so far and must read on!
Title: Cry I 17 Jun 2009 8:33 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    AWW!!! LOVE IT!!
Title: Cry I 06 Mar 2008 4:59 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful begining! It's sad that Hedwig's gone but I love the kitten. I hope McGonagall finds a good punishment for Ron & Seamus!! Grrr, there to HORRIBLE to Harry and he doesn't deserve that, :( (I enjoy torturing Harry too sometimes though) LOL< :) Great story so far!!
Title: Cry I 18 Nov 2007 12:18 am
Reviewer: Mistress Vamp (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A very good beginning :) I'm off to read more! ::MV::
Title: Cry I 14 Nov 2007 9:59 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very different take on the Slytherin!Harry story. I'm intrigued about why McGonagall loves Harry so much and with what will happen with the Gryffindors.

    The writing was not as smooth as it could be in the beginning of the chapter, but it seemed to pick up some as you went along. There were numerous places where the phrasing seemed a little off.
Title: Cry I 14 Nov 2007 6:07 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    “Potter, you do know that saltwater will render the potion useless, don’t you?”

    WOW. What a start to a fantastic story! This is so heartbreakingly believable for the characters to do and go through! All except for Ron, maybe. But there needs to be an antagonist. Wow poor Harry! Beautiful writing! I'm all tense from it.

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