Poor Harry!! What have Snape and Lily done? Guess I'll just have to read more!
I don't really like the idea of James being a silly drunk but I love this story to much to be really anyed by it, :) Love the length of your chapters!
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| 18 Nov 2007 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: Mistress Vamp (Anonymous)
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Whoa. This is intense! ::MV::
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| 17 Nov 2007 3:56 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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AWESOME STORY!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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| 15 Nov 2007 6:12 am
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This is very interesting. I'm really worried about Harry. From the poem at the beginning, I was worried that this would be a "Harry is abused until he gives up and dies" type of story. Please say there is some saving grace to all you are putting Harry through??? And what was that curse that was performed on Harry?
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| 15 Nov 2007 1:33 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Poor, poor Harry. I cannot understand why the school lets everyone get away with their behavior but I do like this Sev. Hope you post again soon.
It should be interesting to see exactly how the potion affected Harry. I like having the history portions interspersed with the current events portions. There were still several areas with odd phrasing.
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| 14 Nov 2007 10:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Chibisnape (Anonymous)
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Fantastic im in love with this fic, Your writing style is such a pleasure to read wow please update soon i have to know what happens.
Interesting and sad story so far. Hopefully things will eventually get better for Harry. I hope you find time to write more soon.
ACK! You can't stop there. I have too many questions!
(Wonderfully done. Kudos.)
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