Title: Cry V
| 17 Jun 2009 8:23 pm
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Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Anonymous)
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Hermione to the rescue! She's everywhere! Again, good work!
Is Cissy messing around with the furture? Really great chapter!!
Title: Cry V
| 02 Jan 2008 10:12 pm
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Reviewer: Mistress Vamp (Anonymous)
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Ok, that's a strange turn of events, but hopefully all will be explained. I'm looking forward to it :) ::MV::
What a place to end!!! WOW... just wow! More soon please!
I'm enjoying this story very much. Thanks for sharing it and for the update.
Very interesting chapter. I am very curious to know what is wrong with Draco. Hope you can update again soon!
I'm glad that Hermione is going to be in on this from the beginning. It looks like you have an interesting background planned for Narcissa--a seer, eh?
I also want to add, what's up with Hermione? Perhaps she has a larger role in all this history than anyone expected? Update, update, update!
Wow. This is certainly a mystery-fic! I really want to know what's going on, so update soon, please!
I absolutly love the incredible back story that you've created here, it's fantastic! There's so much going on, and only a little being divulged at a time, it's going to take a while til Severus understands it all (and thus, us too). But that's ok, I'm in this for the long haul.
I really do adore the story that you've created, though. I'm attempting to come up with some ideas for my own fic and you've inspired me to break out of the common Severus is Harry's dad shell. You certainly have, and it's fantastic! I just hope that we get some more of that dynamic in the next chapter. Severus and Harry both seem really eager to become a family and I can't wait to see their relationship grow.
So, how many secrets is Draco holding? Hmmm...it makes me wonder what else he could know if Narcissa told him that Severus was Harry's father. So, I hope we also get some more of him in this next chapter! Along with that, was Narcissa in the same type of predicament that Lily was? (Being forced to marry Lucius against her own wishes?) But then, if she's a Seer, it would make sense that she would sacrifice her own happiness for the future she'd Seen. Hope to get more young Severus, Lily, and Narcissa. I wonder if James and Lucius were secretly friends in the past...you know, it would almost make sense, ok, not!
Really can't wait! Your plot line moves right along and I'm excited to see where you take us next!
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