Very interesting change of canon events.
Title: Cry IX
| 07 Jan 2008 3:51 pm
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Reviewer: Mistress Vamp (Anonymous)
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Oh hell. Nice freaking twist at the end! ::MV::
Title: Cry IX
| 06 Jan 2008 2:30 pm
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Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Wow!!! That was just plain brilliant!!! I so loved it, update, update, update!!
"Draco and Hermione watched him with"...? Was something supposed to finish that sentance? Also, would Hermione really be able to cast an invisibility charm on herself at 11 years old? Other than that, this was a good chapter and I am really curious to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing those out to me. They are now fixed. I love that you are enjoying the story. Keep reading and reviewing please! - Fat
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