Hmm. Such an interesting difference, yet so sad, is Harry not having Ron or Hermione as friends. This story is already completed, yet I look forward to commenting on the rest of the chapters (at least here and there) as I read them.
| Title: Cry I
| 25 Aug 2009 1:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous)
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WOW! The summary was incredible, and it intrigued me right away! It's such an incredible idea, having Harry put in Slytherin, and the way everyone reacted to it is brilliantly written, if the actions themselves aren't at all brilliant. ;) It is excellent though, and very believable, for lack of a better word, that they would react as you've written it. Hated what they did to Hedwig! I love the way Severus is thinking of Harry, and that him being put in Slytherin made Severus see him as Lily's son, not James'. It's great that Harry is so clever, and I'm glad Hermione and Neville were nice to him. Even if it did turn out worse for him, I like the way they were behaving, it would have been very unrealistic for them to have shoved him. On the whole, I love it so far and must read on!
OOO, revenge on Sirius. LOVE it!!
Ouch, Snape at his harshest. Loved it!
| Title: Cry VI
| 17 Jun 2009 8:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Anonymous)
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OOOOO!! Cliff hanger. Nice effect!
| Title: Cry V
| 17 Jun 2009 8:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Anonymous)
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Hermione to the rescue! She's everywhere! Again, good work!
Aww!! I love Snape-a-doodles!! Poor Harry...
Poor Harry!! What have Snape and Lily done? Guess I'll just have to read more!
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