Potions and Snitches
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Title: Cry II 18 Nov 2007 12:39 am
Reviewer: Mistress Vamp (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Whoa. This is intense! ::MV::
Title: Cry I 18 Nov 2007 12:18 am
Reviewer: Mistress Vamp (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A very good beginning :) I'm off to read more! ::MV::
Title: Cry III 17 Nov 2007 11:16 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! The ending of this really really makes ne want to find out what happens next so please update again soon!
Title: Cry III 17 Nov 2007 9:26 pm
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Some odd little grammar mistakes and flow issues tell me you could use a beta, but other than that it's a great story and I love the way it's unfolding.
Title: Cry III 17 Nov 2007 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantastic. Why does everyone mention Harry's small size but with the wonders of the wizarding world that can regrow bones never give the poor kid a grow potion! Be different and have Sev fix him one.
Title: Cry III 17 Nov 2007 3:06 pm
Reviewer: ChibiSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow i love your story!!! please update soon i just gotta know what happens ^_^
Title: Cry II 17 Nov 2007 3:56 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWESOME STORY!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Title: Cry II 15 Nov 2007 6:12 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is very interesting. I'm really worried about Harry. From the poem at the beginning, I was worried that this would be a "Harry is abused until he gives up and dies" type of story. Please say there is some saving grace to all you are putting Harry through??? And what was that curse that was performed on Harry?
Title: Cry II 15 Nov 2007 1:33 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor, poor Harry. I cannot understand why the school lets everyone get away with their behavior but I do like this Sev. Hope you post again soon.
Title: Cry II 14 Nov 2007 10:15 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    It should be interesting to see exactly how the potion affected Harry. I like having the history portions interspersed with the current events portions. There were still several areas with odd phrasing.

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