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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Great chapter.
Author's Response: He's trying, but he's a bit rusty!
The last fighting scene between Harry & Snape at first I thought it was going to be all sweet & maybe that would hug in the end? But NO! They strarted to scream at each other! Just like boys! Lol, I was looking forward to seeing what Snape would say after Harry told him that He reconized Snape by his smell, but that didn't happen, sigh. Great chapter though! Scorpia Author's Response: LOL Screaming at each other indeed. They end up doing that a lot. LOL I don't think Snape would have appreciated being found out by his smell. LOL Thanks, though. Glad you enjoyed it. Cloves, screaming and all! :oP
I love the fact that Snape is feeling a bit jealous of Remus, as well he should. Remus is really the only adult that seems to care for Harry because he's Harry, not James Potter's son, Lily Potter's son or 'The Boy Who Lived.' He seems to have an unconditional love for Harry. The sad thing is that I'm sure Snape had that same unconditional love for Harry at one point, too, but he threw it all away in bitterness. So, so sad. I bought the OoTP DVD today, but I haven't had a chance to watch it yet. My son had a basketball game out of town, so I got home to late to watch it. Plus, my kids would have been mad if I had watched it without them. I work the next two nights, so I guess I'll have to wait until Friday night to watch it. Dang it! Thanks so mch for the chapter. Take care... Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like my 'floundering' Snape. He's fun, isn't he? Remus is awesome. I always loved him in in the books and wished JKR had done more with the character. He does care so much for Harry and I think that is one of the things that will help Snape to start to feel something for Harry again. Jealousy is powerful and not always in a bad way, I think. The movie was awesome! I had so much fun, but I actually had to stop it a few times to jot down some ideas for the story as it inspired me so much. LOL And, now I want to write a Sirius/Harry story. They had me in tears. The next chapter should be up up tonight or tomorrow. Enjoy.
I must say that I agree with cathyrf, Severus did need a few good smacks to the head. But I agree that he's trying with Harry. I did like seeing him come to the realization that Harry's the same person as the baby he held all those years ago. That at least stopped me from throwing my laptop at the wall! I can't wait to see them actually talk about their relation, though. But it's good that it's all agnsty-it's the best!! You kept them both really in character here too, Severus being all snarky and sarcastic; Harry needing to dredge up some Gryffindor courage to ask about Snape staying in the infirmary all night. It was great to hear Harry talk to Ginny too...who of course knows what's going on without him telling her the whole truth. It's great that they're close, I feel that she's going to be Harry's major pillar of support. Hermione and Ron...well, that quidditch match was certainly interesting, as well as Hermoine's cushioning charm...a little too enthusiastic! I love it!! Remus...he's turned out to be a great character. I do love how he's sticking up and watching out for Harry. He's so protective, it's adorable! I just hope that he and Severus can come to an understanding (maybe not actually be friends, because while I believe that Harry and Snape can overcome their past, I don't really think that Snape and Lupin will all of a sudden be best mates) that they're both trying to protect the same person. But, that's for later. I'm also expecting more light to be brought to the issue of Dumbledore...hehe. What else...I'm really looking forward to seeing Severus beat himself up after his little confrontaition with Harry. And he was doing soo good in the dungeons, albeit alone, with his feelings!! But, it wouldn't make sense for Harry to suddenly feel comfortable around Severus, and for Severus to suddenly proclaim his love for Harry. You've got them in character perfectly and it's brilliant. Until next chapter! (Don't watch too much OotP, set some time aside to write too!) Author's Response: Okay, okay...I finally turned off the TV (after watching the whole movie and then all the extras too...I was really annoyed BTW that they didn't include the scene with Ron and Harry at the end...it was rather sweet...have you seen it?) and now I've written two more pages, just for all of you. I was so incredibly inspired by the movie. I guess I already knew it before but it really stroke me with some of the lines how much Harry would do for a chance for a family. I was kind of in awe and it really gave me some great ideas for the story. So, it wasn't totally wasted time, right? lol I had to laugh at the image of you throwing your laptop.... I know Sev is an idiot, but he is trying, you're right. And, he'll figure all of this out soon enough...or at least enough to not leave Harry in a puddle on the floor next time. Glad you like the "enthusiastic" charm of Hermione's. I love that girl! I love Remus too and he's back in the next chapter, adorably protective. :) Remus and Snape do need to get to some kind of understanding since I'm sure Harry will want both of them in his life eventually. Wonder if Snape will realize that? Dumbledore...he's got a lot to get done before he can come back and perhaps explain himself....hee hee. Severus will keep working on his feelings. I think this Sev does understand things very well about feelings (much different from the Canon stories because our Sev was once very deeply loved and I think that changed him profoundly, even with all that happened). THanks so much for your compliments. Well, back to Severus and Harry...
oh, and great job with the updates! You're like lightning... Author's Response: Like lightening....LOL! I love it. Thanks so much for your review and I'm so glad you like it so much. It is really hard NOT to make them just come together already but it's not very realistic that way I guess and I can't resist the angst! Next chapter should be up tomorrow or the next day. I just finished OOTP on DVD so I'm afraid I wasted this night away! But, I was incredibly inspired by it, so we'll all win, I guess! :o) |
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