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Reviews For Lily's Charm
It's such a shame that they can't open up with one another, but after their history, that's expecting too much at this point, I suppose. Hopefully, they will be able to later on, though. I really like Remus here, too. It's good that he's here for Harry. I like Remus, but I couldn't help feeling annoyed with him in canon, as he pretty much abandoned Harry, imho. I'm glad he's doing a better job of being there for him in your story. Looking forward to more! Author's Response:
I totally agree with you! I loved Remus in the books too and was so annoyed when he didn't even show his face for a year and then Harry was so happy to see him at the beginning of book 5. Missed the boat a bit there, JKR.... Anyways, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. It is so hard to write them not just talking, for real. But, Sev did at least try this time. Thanks for the compliments about their emotions. I love emotional Harry. Don't know why. He's just fun! Remus and Snape are up next. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Can't help myself with the cliffhangers, sorry! But, once I get to a really juicy stopping place, I get so excited to post it, that I just have to do it before I keep going on. I already have half of the next chapter written but couldn't stop there as it just didn't work, so I gave you a cliffie, but hey, at least you got a new chapter tonight, instead of 2 days from now, right? :o) Thanks for reviewing.
Don't get me wrong...he had me seriously boo-hooing for a minute or so. The line inspired by KimSpiritTalks was a heart wrencher. Right along with touching Harry's forehead. Oh, the angst! Darn it, my computer tissue box is out of hankies. Got to remember to get a new box. But then he had to go right along and ruin it by being so snippy with Harry and trouncing off at the end. Smack, smack, smack!! Naturally, I don't expect our surly potions master to do anything else other than what he did, and would have kind of been annoyed if he got all cuddly all the sudden (so thanks for keeping him in character!) But I still want to smack him anyway. That's just me, hee hee. Hermione's over enthusiastic cushioning charm...what a riot. And Lupin's comment to Severus "about someone who actually cares." OUCH!! But, he kind of deserved that, didn't he? I love it when those two snipe at each other. And I giggled when Pomfrey calling them "boys." Too funny. As funny as Minerva telling Severus that he WILL show up for dinner. I just love that witch. Poor Harry is doomed because Severus has told him not to tell his friends, but OOPS! They already know! That's going to go over like a lead balloon. More chocolate frogs coming your way. Does it make you write faster? And pouting because I can't watch the movie yet because I think I'm getting it in HD format for a Christmas present, sigh... Author's Response: I have told you how much I like you, right? :) First of all, OOTP is my Christmas present too! From my husband, although I am going to buy it for myself tomorrow, watch it a million times and then wrap it back up and open it on Christmas! How's that for awesome? LOL Yeah, Harry really does deserve a hug after that ordeal, doesn't he? But, I think, maybe Snape's response will at least give him somewhat of a clue...well maye if he has someone to help him translate for him anyways! LOL And, oh yes, Snape getting smacked a few times would be rather helpful, wouldn't it? But, I'm sure he'll berate himself enough anyways. Come on, the guy has to know he's over the top, right? I'm so glad though that you liked the Snape-ishness this chapter. I was kinda worried people would tell me to just get on with the mushy-gooey already, but I just can't do it! The angst is necessary first! Hermione is priceless and I just couldn't resist her bungling up the charm and somehow, I picture Poppy being old and being the Healer when Sev and Lupin were in school. Not sure why, either from Canon or some fanfiction I read, but I couldn't resist that one either. Yep, Harry's indiscretion is bound to bring another round of angst for these two, isn't it. Hee hee. Don't worry, despite myself, the next chapter is already in progress. I just can't help it...I'm obsessed! Thanks for another review!
/:( Loved this chapter. Fiercely protective Snape who cannot just state his emotions without spitting or hissing at Harry. Oh the angst! Author's Response: All right, you caught me...the movie is not much likely to inspire me for this story, but I was trying to make you all think good thought since I might keep you hanging longer than usual! :) I love Snape and it really stunk that he didn't get much face time in the movie. BOO! HISS! Glad you loved the angst. I was kind of nervous people would start getting annoyed that Harry and Severus hadn't just kissed and made up by now. I want them too as well, but unfortunately they have other plans. And, Severus was trying so hard too. Poor guy. Maybe now Harry can finally, really get it. And hopefully, Severus won't shut him out. I guess we'll see. :) |
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