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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Good chap.
Author's Response: You know Snape attacking Lupin because he thought he was sleeping with Harry is one of my favorite parts of the whole story. It's the first moment that Sev realizes that he cares already about Harry. YAY
Scorpia Author's Response: LOL Sev has his issues with Ginny and Harry but no more will I say. :oP
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's quite a wonderful compliment! :)
Love your Lupin and Ginny. That line about Snape being alone for so long was just so sad. What a tragedy for Snape and Harry... Keep up the great work! I really am enjoying this! Author's Response: You're welcome! Glad you liked it and yeah, Snape is in a pretty sad situation, isn't he? It's good though that Harry is finally clueing in! The whole situation is just utterly tragic, but that's the way I love it! LOL Ginny and Lupin are particularly favorites of mine. I just couldn't get enough of them in the books, though they were not in them nearly enough, IMO. Oh well. That's what fanfiction is for, I guess. :) I'm glad you felt better after I responded to your review. About the Malfoys, I mean. The Malfoys have quite a large role here and Draco especially. Maybe more will be revealed in the next chapter.....although maybe more bits of tantalizing teasers than anything useful. :oP Thanks so much for reviewing. The next chapter will hopefully be up by tomorrow night. I think you'll enjoy it. It is chock full of Severus and Harry lovliness!
Author's Response: Thanks! You're so funny. :)
Letting Harry come to Severus' private quarters was amazingly placed. I also love how Harry was so surprised that he choked on floo powder, I love it!! It was also great for Harry to see a little more of who 'Severus' really is. As well as gaining the knowledge that he never stopped loving Lily...that means that somewhere deeply hidden from view, Ol' Sev never stopped loving Harry either, right?, right? Well, that scene was beautifully done and I still adore how differently Severus is approaching Occlumency Lessons this time around. Ok, I think I'm done now...till next chapter! Happy Tuesday! Author's Response: Don't apologize. I absolutely thrive on these reviews....it makes me want to jump right into the next chapter. The Floo choking was fun. It just seemed so "Harry", you know? LOL And, yeah this is a very important moment for Severus to have let Harry in. The scene with Remus was pivotal. Even Snape can't deny now that he cares about Harry, after trying to choke Remus to death for what he thought Remus was up to! And yes, it was very important for Harry to see the physical evidence of Snape's love for his mum. And here's where it gets tricky....Snape very much, just like with Lily, never stopped loving his little boy. What he has to realize (and he slowly slowly is) is that Harry, this Harry is the same little boy. He keeps getting glimpses and trying to tell himself that but he really needs to just GET IT. It was as if that little son died with Lily that night, he grieved for him as though he had. Harry Potter, 10 years later when he showed up for the sorting, was not the same boy Sev had lost, in Snape's mind. Now, he is rediscovering his son. *snif*.
And Remus, he's just adorable. I want to give them all big hugs!! Author's Response: Well, Snape didn't actually say he wasn't tortured, just that the Cruciatus Curse wasn't used on him. :oP Remus is adorable. I love him. |
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