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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 15 Jul 2023 8:07 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was wonderfully emotional in a very believable way given the nature of your Snape and Harry.
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 16 Aug 2010 7:20 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Bravo! Well done on this chapter. Dunno about you, but I find emotional scenes oft-times difficult to write.
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 01 Sep 2009 10:24 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Serious tear-jerker.

    I'd started reading this series on ff.net and then lost track of where I left off, so am re-reading. Awesome chapter, Tabitha!
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 26 Jul 2009 7:46 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *smirks* Well, that was an intense chapter. Good job. You are quite an impressive author.
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 24 Apr 2008 11:27 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful touching chapter!
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 02 Mar 2008 7:30 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad i didn't go to bed, this chapter so far had the best fluff! Lol, :)

    Author's Response: LOL  Well, get prepared beacause it's not the last!  LOL  Glad you enjoyed it though.  :o)
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 05 Feb 2008 5:27 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Question - Just why is it that P&S has so many really good authors intent on wringing tears from me on a regular basis?

    In other words... "Whew" is correct. That was amazing. Thank you.

    Author's Response: LOL  You scared me for a minute. :oP  Glad you liked and really, I bask in all these tears.  I love to reduce the readers to tears.  It's just fun!  :o)  You are very welcome.  Thanks so much for the review as well.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 04 Jan 2008 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, OE, this chapter is amazing! I think the story has been building up to these moments for a while, and you delivered them perfectly. I ran through a whole gamut of emotions here.

    First of all, I'm so happy that Severus and Harry have finally made a real break-through. They've shared intimate memories (voluntarily), cried and held one another, and admitted that they care about their relationship. I had tears in my eyes and a smile on my face while reading these parts.

    On the other hand, I can't help feeling sad, too,...for all the needless pain they've both suffered, and for all the time they've lost. I completely understand Harry still feeling hurt about the past. Severus has been pretty cruel, and nowwing that his own father could let his feelings be so warped...well, Harry's being very mature and understanding, but it would still have to hurt.

    I have such mixed feelings for Severus myself, (isn't it obvious?). I really do understand how hurt and betrayed he felt, and I'm so sorry for all his pain. But it still bothers me that he could let his feelings for an innocent baby change so much, that he could later treat young Harry with such contempt. If I were Harry, I'd still need a lot of time to try to come to terms with it. I believe Harry will...and should...forgive Severus, maybe he already has by this point. But it's hard to believe that he doesn't feel hurt and confused by it all, and that he would still be affected by Severus' past treatment. Maybe even wonder if Severus' feelings could change again. I personally think Severus is Harry's for good now, but I could see it being something Harry might fret over and need reassurances about.

    I'm also glad about Harry's appearance staying the same. I agree with what you and others have said...sometimes it works, but I really do like picturing Harry as, well, 'Harry'.

    Ginny and Remus were wonderful, here, too. I can sympathize with Remus--it must not be easy letting go of Harry, even if it's just to a certain extent. I'm curious to see how the Remus...Severus...Harry relationship works out.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!  I'm so excited that you enjoyed the chapter so much.  I'm glad to that I tapped your emotions.  I love to hear that. 

    They have had a real break through here and yet I have to agree with you of course.  Things can't really have been settled...at least not for Harry, not completely.  And even Severus can't feel perfectly at ease about their relationship.  After all, he knows he's been a bastard to Harry for years and he's already admitted that he doesn't expect Harry to just forgive and forget.  I think Sev's depth of feeling here are much stronger than Harry's...at least for awhile.  

    Harry is still very hurt and still even probably confused.  I think he does understand, but that won't stop the fear he has that if Severus could toss him away once, he could very well do it again.  And no, Harry has not forgiven Severus, not really.  I think he has such a need to have someone care about him that he really is willing to let more things slide than he should, but there are too many emotions still boiling at the surface for Harry to be ready to just move on.  I don't know how much Severus will realize that though so it should be interesting.  :o)

    "Severus is Harry's for good now..."  I just love that line.  And you're right, but Harry won't be able to believe that right now.  Not even after their breakthrough.  It's all very tangled, isn't it?  But I love it that way!  LOL

    I'm glad you're satisfied with Harry's appearance.  I love when he just stays the same.  It's weird to picture him looking differently.  

    Ginny and Remus are awesome, aren't they?  And yes, I really feel for our poor werewolf too.  It's hard to let Harry go like that.  But don't worry...Harry's not gonn let Remus get too far away.   I don't think that will ever change.  

    Thanks for the review! 

Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 03 Jan 2008 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Keina (Signed) [Report This]
    I-loved-it ! Oh my god... it's happy you publish so fast because I would have to go and chain you to your keyboard, I can't wait to read your chapters ;-)

    Author's Response: LOL  That's hilarous.  I don't think anyone needs to chain me here though...my husband usually has to drag me away kicking and screaming!  LOL  I'm so glad you liked the chapter.  :o)
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 03 Jan 2008 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    Bloody Brilliant!

    Author's Response: LOL  Well, thank you very much!  Glad you enjoyed it.  :o)

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