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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 15 Jul 2023 8:21 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah yes, I guess it had to go sideways again at some point. Nothing can be easy for these two.
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 16 Aug 2010 8:01 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, dear. This bodes not well. >.- Acting without knowing all the fact = generally not good.

    Another awesome chapter - can't wait to find out more about What's Going On.
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 26 Jul 2009 8:40 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Stupid stupid boy! *growls softly*
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 10 Sep 2008 6:17 am
Reviewer: nixglen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This just gets better & better. I haven't been able to stop reading since I started it.

    Author's Response:

    YAY!  I love it when someone new finds the story.  It's like re-living it over again for me.  Let me know when you finish it and how you liked it.  :o)

     

Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 24 Apr 2008 11:53 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I just threw up a little in my mouth from this line "deliberately ignoring the squeaky squelch of the flesh as it ripped open."...

    Author's Response: LOL  Sorry!  I love that line actually... 
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 10 Mar 2008 1:28 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so pissed right now -- I've been reading this story for about the last four hours and I am hooked beyond expressible words... and now I'm being forced to stop reading for a while.

    This story is absolutely incredible. The details and storyline are quite original being that it's a Severitus story, and for that I am very impressed.

    Thanks for writing :)
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 02 Mar 2008 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's is trooooouuble! LOL, (shakes head) Doesn't that boy ever learn?

    Author's Response: Well, eventually, he will.  It's gonna take quite a few more chapters though.  LOL 
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 08 Jan 2008 10:40 pm
Reviewer: Freddie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a review for Chapter 22. I have been lurking for a long while in this story! Really love it so I thought I'd let you know! You are really talented at writing complex emotion! (I do have one favor to ask - if this story ever starts to contain C.P. please post warnings so those of us who find it completely offensive and ridiculous will not have to read it.) I hope this story won't as I love it so. I just really can't stand people portraying C.P. as necessary or at all good for teenagers. It has taken over this sight to the point - I have almost stopped reading here. I really hate it! But I really LOVE your story and the "What If" version. That picture Cathy drew is really a gem too. You are so awesome with your updates! Please write on!

    Author's Response:

    Hello!  Thanks for reviewing.  First of all...nope no C.P.  I don't really mind it in fics but it won't be in this at all.  I assume you've asked because Severus said, "You'll have more to deal with than my shouting..." LOL   A couple of other readers asked me about that too and it was just Snape being threatening old Snape, same as he said earlier in the hospital wing that he would make Harry regret it if he told his friends their secret.  Don't worry...this Snape's style is more of the scrubbing cauldrons variety. Now, some of that, I may be able to promise you.  :oP   After all, this is Harry we're talking about!

    Thanks for the compliments and I'm so glad you're enjoying it.  And, I'm happy too that you looked at Cathy's picture.  It really is beautiful. I have it on my desktop background on my laptop and I just can't help myself staring at it.  LOL

    :o) 

     

Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 08 Jan 2008 11:08 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, there goes Harry, off acting rashly again. Although this time I can't say I blame him. He's really worried about Remus and, with his track record regarding the caring adults in his life, he has a right to be.

    I'm not really sure why all the adults in his life think it's a good idea to keep Harry out of the loop of information. Hindsight has proven time and again that if the boy was better informed about the things that concern him life would be a lot easier. But, I guess then we wouldn't have such fun stories to read.

    Thanks for the update. Now I'm off to read the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yeah, keeping Harry out of the loop is never a good idea.  Guess we'll see if anyone can figure that out!  :oP  Glad you enjoyed the chapter. 
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 07 Jan 2008 11:54 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I thought the tension between Harry and Severus was so realistic...of course they're going to be ill at ease and unsure after their last interaction. They may have opened up, but they're both still pretty unsure of each other.

    I do understand if the Wolfsbane Potion needed tending to, but I also think that Severus really should know that spending a day doing 'detention-type' things is not going to make Harry particularly eager to spend another Saturday with him.

    I like the plot you've got going with Draco, and I do feel sorry for him here. I don't always Draco, but you've done a good job of portraying how desperate he feels.

    And poor Harry, of course he's terrified of losing Remus, too. I hope everything will work out for him.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked the Harry/Sev tenstion during the first part of the morning.  I was going for Harry's trying to make sure Severus won't change his mind, even if pushes really hard.  I was a psych major!   LOL

    I think the point of Sev's Potion making was actually supposed to make Harry see that Sev would trust him with Potions, something he never would have done before.  I think at this point, no matter what Severus would have had planned, Harry wouldn't have been thrilled because he was just too nervous.

    Yay!  Glad you liked Draco.  I've always liked him...the dark side to Harry.  Thanks for saying I portrayed his desperation well.  That's what I was going for, so yay!  :o)

    Yeah, he's really just terrified of losing everybody, isn't he?  Poor Harry.  Thanks for reviewing!


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