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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Another awesome chapter - can't wait to find out more about What's Going On.
Author's Response: YAY! I love it when someone new finds the story. It's like re-living it over again for me. Let me know when you finish it and how you liked it. :o)
Author's Response: LOL Sorry! I love that line actually...
This story is absolutely incredible. The details and storyline are quite original being that it's a Severitus story, and for that I am very impressed. Thanks for writing :)
Author's Response: Well, eventually, he will. It's gonna take quite a few more chapters though. LOL
Author's Response: Hello! Thanks for reviewing. First of all...nope no C.P. I don't really mind it in fics but it won't be in this at all. I assume you've asked because Severus said, "You'll have more to deal with than my shouting..." LOL A couple of other readers asked me about that too and it was just Snape being threatening old Snape, same as he said earlier in the hospital wing that he would make Harry regret it if he told his friends their secret. Don't worry...this Snape's style is more of the scrubbing cauldrons variety. Now, some of that, I may be able to promise you. :oP After all, this is Harry we're talking about! Thanks for the compliments and I'm so glad you're enjoying it. And, I'm happy too that you looked at Cathy's picture. It really is beautiful. I have it on my desktop background on my laptop and I just can't help myself staring at it. LOL :o)
I'm not really sure why all the adults in his life think it's a good idea to keep Harry out of the loop of information. Hindsight has proven time and again that if the boy was better informed about the things that concern him life would be a lot easier. But, I guess then we wouldn't have such fun stories to read. Thanks for the update. Now I'm off to read the next chapter. Author's Response: Yeah, keeping Harry out of the loop is never a good idea. Guess we'll see if anyone can figure that out! :oP Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I do understand if the Wolfsbane Potion needed tending to, but I also think that Severus really should know that spending a day doing 'detention-type' things is not going to make Harry particularly eager to spend another Saturday with him. I like the plot you've got going with Draco, and I do feel sorry for him here. I don't always Draco, but you've done a good job of portraying how desperate he feels. And poor Harry, of course he's terrified of losing Remus, too. I hope everything will work out for him. Author's Response: Glad you liked the Harry/Sev tenstion during the first part of the morning. I was going for Harry's trying to make sure Severus won't change his mind, even if pushes really hard. I was a psych major! LOL I think the point of Sev's Potion making was actually supposed to make Harry see that Sev would trust him with Potions, something he never would have done before. I think at this point, no matter what Severus would have had planned, Harry wouldn't have been thrilled because he was just too nervous. Yay! Glad you liked Draco. I've always liked him...the dark side to Harry. Thanks for saying I portrayed his desperation well. That's what I was going for, so yay! :o) Yeah, he's really just terrified of losing everybody, isn't he? Poor Harry. Thanks for reviewing! |
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