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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Severus sitting on the couch with a sleeping Harry and SMILING! I can just see that image...it is so precious. Loved how Poppy called Harry into her office so that Severus could remind Harry that his attitude was an act. He understands how fragile their relationship is and if possible after he has to act hostile towards him for others' benefit that he reminds Harry as quickly as he can that it truly is "an act." And Harry wishing it didn't have to be that way, and Severus reassuring him with "it will not always be so" - Severus is going to get one of those cute "Dad is #1" trophies (you know the kind I'm talking about... the little cheesy plastic thingys they sell at Wal-Mart) by Father's Day, I just know it! I was wondering where the angst was going to show up (hey, chapter titles don't lie!) and naturally, I got walluped at the end. Oh, poor Severus! Is Harry going to be angry at him or try and console him? Yikes! Write fast please! We fans need to know! Author's Response: When I first read your review I thought you were saying that Lily had an interest in Remus! I was yelling at the screen, "No, no, that's not what I was trying to write at all!" I read it again though and breathed a huge sigh of relief. Whew. A spark FROM Remus though...I think so. But I kind of picture Lily as being that type of girl that yeah, guys especially are just drawn to and can't help liking. But, that is not something Remus would ever act on...too much respect and love for their friendship. He's far too honorable, I think. :o) This did have lots of cute moments, didn't it and then I had to go and spoil it with all my angst at the end...but at least some of our mysteries are being solved a bit here! LOL I'm glad you liked Sev's dealing quickly with Harry's worry in Poppy's office. He learns quickly, that one. LOL about your trophy...he definitely will deserve one! Hmm....I guess you'll have to wait to see how Harry reacts to this news and don't forget, he too is finally starting to deal with the idea that he will have to kill Voldemort. Oh, the angst for next chapter!! I can't resist for too long! :oP |
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