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Reviews For Lily's Charm
That probably didn't really make any sense in my review, but it definitely did in my head. Sorry about that, lol. Author's Response: Lily will do her best...once they get around to it. LOL You'll see.... I love the Tinkerbell comment. LOL Oh, and it made perfect sense.
Thanks so much for the quick updates. I would be going crazy if I had to wait too long in between chapters. Especially when they are such heart-wrenching chapters. Take care... Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so please you enjoyed it. I'm glad you were touched by it. Harry is having a rough time of it, isn't he? He does have lots of people to help him through it though so hopefully he'll be all right. Ah. That conversation made me cry as well. The bargaining was heartbreaking. :o( Thanks...hope you enjoy chapter 33! Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: LOL I'll update soon. Promise. :o) Harry does need Severus...I agree with you there!
Excellent job! i love it.. and poor harry... sounds like he'll never be the same! even if Severus does come back, Harry's emotions will be teetering for a long time to come. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i don't think i can take any more cliff hangers! :) hug to you! Author's Response: LOL I'm really trying to cliffhang all of you. (really, truly) I just have been trying to move things along at a very slow pace...just like Harry's feeling right now. You're right there with him! :oP You're right. Harry will never be the same after this...no matter what happens!
Such as...Dumbledore's ease at Malfoy Manor. What was UP with that? And I forgot to mention about how hard it was for Harry to see Severus get changed into a hospital gown from his deatheater robes. Another good point by you. You really truly must come over and join us on the Yahoo board if you haven't already. I'm (all in the name of silly fun) writing with others help some possible future scenarios for Lily's Charm and we're having a darn good time. I'd LOVE to hear your input. Author's Response: Okay, okay. I can't reveal everything...although I am about ot divulge something quite huge next chapter. *evil, evil grin* Dumbles has spent lots of time of late with those Malfoys. :o)
Is there a special reason that Molly Weasley wasn't with the rest of her family in D's office? Just wondering...more frogs for you! Author's Response: Molly...yes indeed. There is a very good reason. I'll even tell you. :oP She's hanging out in the Gryffindor common room. Did you really think she was gonna stand around at home, waiting for Voldy's DEs to capture her babies? LOL It was a very tricky maneuver for McGonagall to get Ginny outta there and even more tricky when Hermione went to find Ron after they left. LOL Think on that for awhile! :oP
To ObsidianEmbrace: ...stop updating so late at night!! I need to sleep for class! But, then again, shame on college for getting in the way of my fanfiction! I'm really glad that you update when you do, it acts as a nice pick-me-up until I remember I have to leave the wonderful world of Harry Potter and enter the "real" one. *scans chapter to remember what to write about...curses college some more* I too enjoyed seeing Dumbles in a little position of hurt...well, maybe that's put a little strong. I'm glad we got to get inside his head to see what he thought of the situation. Could you please say some more about these few sentences: "[Dumbles]Wished that he had questioned Lily and James more fully; wished he had followed his instincts regarding Severus. But he hadn’t. He’d believed Lily as fully as Severus had." What, pray tell was it that he believed? Didn't he know that Lily had lied to Sev when she said that James was Harry's father?! AHA! Dumbledore doesn't think that Sev would let go of everything in this world so easily, mainly Harry, so I don't think he will (but more on that later). It was nice to find some tidbit of information that showed how much Sev loves Harry...that every conversation Dumbles had with Sev Harry was mentioned...*sigh* It's nice to know that a friendship of sorts has been formed between Remus and Sev too. Just to know that Harry has both of them to turn to (along with Ginny, I suppose) when he's got problems or something important...is nice, and makes me feel content! "He stepped out AGAIN into the elegant parlour." Hmmm...I wonder if this is a clue...Dumbledore seemed too at ease within Malfoy Manor and I don't exactly know what to make of it. Although it could be that D visited Lucius earlier that night, when he first escaped Voldie...but then why would he ask the Healer how he's doing...hmmm...or am I completely wasting my brain cells here? Just a hint...please... It was good to know why Lucius did what he did and how...although I'm upset about that. It's disturbing that Lucius didn't even consider Sev as a friend...granted I don't think Sev considered Lucius a friend either. But, nonetheless, I am glad that Sev got out alive (relatively...more on that later) and to the infirmary. More Draco soon? I do wonder what Voldie is going to do with his failure...and feel kinda sad. Your Draco is much more tolerable than most, focusing on the things he has in common with Harry...and I suppose it's nice. *shrugs* I too liked how Dumbledore didn't give away a lot of information, just stated, "Sev is Harry's father" and left it at that. I do look forward to Harry's discussion with the Weasleys though and hope that they keep their shirts on! It would really suck if they aren’t accepting or something like that (which I doubt that they would be)...so, hopefully soon. I agree with you too, poor Remus when he gets Tonks alone..."Mum's gonna have kittens." *giggles uncontrollably* I thought your discription(s) of Harry's pain were...beautiful. Or beautifully written and so true. It was hard to go through all those emotions with him, but the hurt will be overbalanced with the joy...hopefully. It was nice to read Harry's reaction to Sev wearing his DE robes (forgot to tell you that last chapter) as well as Harry's reaction to the spell Sev taught him to change his clothes. *sigh* It was nice to have Ginny insist to stay with Harry, but he really does need to spend all the time he can with him...TO MAKE HIM REALIZE THAT HARRY STILL NEEDS HIM AND COME BACK!!!! Lily better help in that department too! She really would rather wait alone for a few more years (or many, many more years if I have anything to say about it!) for Sev to come back to her than have Harry suffer...she's that self-sacrificing...check out Chapter 1 of SS, if you don't believe me. It was so hard to hear the news about Sev...and there just has to be a way for him to come back, there does! These past few chapters have just been hard, feeling everything with Harry as he does; Severus is dead; Severus is not dead, but alive; Severus is brain-dead...just too much...and not enough at the same time! So I give a big "Thank You" to you as well as more hugs and kisses!! And as much as I want the next chapter, I don't want the next chapter...*sigh* Basically what Cathy said...yeah, thanks twin! Have a good next chapter, whenever that may come out! I don't think I have to say it, but I will anyway...I hope your muse keeps bugging you to write!! You've turned into a machine and it's a brilliant one at that! Have a good week! Author's Response: Hmmm...I actually never know when to post. I was up very late last night however and so it was a very late post. I answered your Molly and Dumbles/Lucius question in your other review and in cathy's. :o) Did Dumbles know Lily lied? Nope. Had you all going, didn't I? Harry as well. Dumlbes sure wishes he had legilimized her. There wasn't much time however. She and James died shortly after. Dumbles is involved more than just a lack of knowing Lily lied but I won't tell more than that. I think I've given away quite enough today...thank you very much! Friendship mostly on Remus' part at this point. :o) Lucius is very disturbing, yes. That's why I had to include that part the way I did. Lucius and Sev, so very different are actually very much the same. Hmmm Yes, Draco will be here soon, but not yet. I'm glad he's tolerable though. LOL I did enjoy that scene in Dumbles' office. LOL Well, thank you so much. I'm so happy you felt what Harry was feeling. Harry couldn't really take the whole DE robes thing. *brr* Now, that's disturbing. Harry is trying to hard to keep it together and with his little convo with his father, he was going through too many emotions. It was very hard to write. I know Harry needs him. I know, I know. I'm doing my best! :o( LOL Lily is pretty self-sacrificing. Too funny. Oh goody. I could use those hugs and kisses. I am drained. :oP
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