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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Beautiful written.
I'd should explain why, if it were so! :) Ok, I'm sure there must be a sparkle among those ashes, pleeaaase!! Anyway... lovely as always! Author's Response: LOL Harry is looking for that sparkle. :o) I'm glad you enjoyed though, even with some tears. I love tears. Thanks for reviewing and hope you enjoy the next.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. And that you like the story. Of course, I can never tire of hearing that. LOL about Sev in town. I'll have a chat with Lily for you. :o)
excellent chapter, I loved it so much! i know that you're getting these chapters out really fast, and I'm SO thankful! but how can i not want more when you leave us with these cliff hangers?!!! :) please update soon! great job Author's Response: Harry did lie to Sev but still, Sev's gotta wanna come back, I think. We'll see how it all unravels. :o) Update will be out soon. thanks for reviewing.
I too really enjoyed feeling this all, one more time, exactly as Harry feels it. It is truly hard to go through the motions with this guy. He is having a hard 6th year. Do I really need to say how much I love this werewolf? He's amazing when he's got something and someone to fight for and thus a powerful force to be reconed with. He really was a great ancor for Harry throughout this chapter, again. Love you to death Remus...just not Sev's!! More on that later. I really liked how calm Harry was when talking to Dumbledore. It's nice to know that the kid from the end of the 5th book has matured although the reasons for this maturing are not what one would hope for. Those scenes between Sev and Lily were not any less painful than what was happening in the real world. It's really depressing that Severus is going to have to leave this to come back to Harry, but Lily is just so self-sacrificing that she'll be able to wait. However, Harry is also extremely self-sacrificing and those lines were really hard to accept...that he just wants his father to be happy and not sound selfish by demanding he return to be with him. But the truth is, it's really not all that selfish, Harry. It's ok for you to want your father and you're not denying you mother anything (or so I thought) but she'll be willing to wait...and you physically can't. I really love the Weasleys but sometimes Molly just doesn't get it when she thinks she does. Did someone happen to explain to them that Harry and Sev have been on good terms for almost the entire year? Well, perhaps that's what the Ginny interrigation was about... But I love them none the less and they're all great to be there for Harry, but he really didn't have anything to say to them. I think that's because they really just don't get it. Love Remus and Tonks...and I'm glad that she understands that he was just keeping Harry safe, so easy to forgive. Although I was worried when she stormed into the infirmary with RED hair. *wipes brow* That whole scene definatly turned out better than I was expecting! I also loved her "Come on, Weasley's"...sheep dog hearding sheep is right! I really liked having Pomphrey move Sev into his room. And where did Sev get that picture of Harry, hmm? I really liked how Harry would help Pomphrey with Sev too. But that lie...*heart breaks yet again* The image of Sev's mind is still haunting me. I don't know how I react if I found myself there, but Harry is also much braver than me. I just hope that somehow Sev is able to hear Harry calling to him; Lily brings up the topic of their son; Sev brings up the topic of their son; Harry finds a tiny spark left in the ashes...just bring him back Harry, Lily, or Sev...just get back. I just want to let you know that I am still talking to you and give you a tight hug to try and quell my sobs. I also wish you luck with the next chapter. Thank you for typing your fingers off for us and I'll sit here patiently for the next installment. (And hopefully am not tempted to visit your yahoo group so I can get some work done tonight.) Thank you, have a good night and Friday tomorrow. Author's Response: Bleak, Kristin...bleak. Yes....so bleak... I'm glad your still feeling this with Harry. He is not doing so great, is he? Harry is maturing as we speak and a lot of it is due to what he thinks Sev would want him to do. Having someone care about you is really a very powerful incentive. I'm actually really happy you felt the pain of what was happening with Lily and Sev. It truly is heartbreaking. What a hard choice...or is it? :oP Harry though, you're right. It is too hard for him. He wants to be selfless and selfish, all at the same time. Talk about a crisis! Molly and the Weasleys, well of course they don't get it but can you really expect them to? They haven't seen anything but bad things between Sev and Harry. They need time to believe all is right. Yeah, Ron and Ginny already told them that things were fine between them and yes even so, they were still pressing Ginny for details. LOL I think the red was more for passion. She had a very rough night and really lots of time to thinga about Remus and how wonderful he is to Harry. Now, come on...how can I girl not want to snog a man who obviously will make a beautiful daddy someday! :oP I'm glad that lie broke your heart. It broke mine....and Harry's as well. *sigh* Hmm...where did Sev get that pic? That truly was a very bleak scene in Sev's mind. Scary, really. Thanks for the review! I love them as always. :o)
Let him go, Lily. You can have him again in 100 years. Author's Response: LOL That's right, Lily...let him go! Hey, and I never said all hope was lost! Keep holding, keep holding. |
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